Nette Onclaud Poet Triolet

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Delightful Things

Waltz me gently through morn’s embrace
The kettle chimes     birdsongs enthrall
As  rails of dew entwine like lace--
Waltz me gently through morn’s embrace:

Vibrant  this heart  flowing with grace
To taste new charms of heaven’s sprawl--
Waltz me gently through morn’s embrace
The kettle chimes     birdsongs enthrall !



For Brian Strand

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Constance La France April 21, 2019 at 5:55 PM Nette, this is a lovely Triolet and would for sure been on the winning list, sorry you did not get to enter it.

Gershon Wolf April 10, 2019 at 9:29 PM Delicious in every aspect, nette! A real winner. ~ gw

M. L. Kiser April 10, 2019 at 8:00 PM And what a morning it is! Love the picture, too.

Ralph Sergi April 8, 2019 at 7:59 AM Hi nette: I was thrilled with the rhythm oft this poem epitomizing the morning. WELL DONE!

Pashang Salehi April 8, 2019 at 6:18 AM Beautifully done...

Caren Krutsinger April 8, 2019 at 12:40 AM This one waltzes around with delicacy, diplomacy, and beauty that reminds me of the lovely gowns, gloves, and jewelry too.

Anne-Lise Andresen April 7, 2019 at 2:21 PM - Wonderfully, Nette :) - GL in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gershon Wolf April 7, 2019 at 1:09 PM Thank you for waltzing all of us gently with this beautiful poem! :) gw

Richard Lamoureux April 7, 2019 at 11:35 AM Delightful indeed, hugs and thanks for your visit.

Arturo Michael April 7, 2019 at 11:24 AM Lovely...enchanting too...

Joanna Daniel April 7, 2019 at 10:20 AM Ah! Beautiful, I love this one, Nette:) Gonna fave it:)

Sara Kendrick April 7, 2019 at 10:10 AM Reads like a good contender to me. I haven't looked at the contest but it reads here like an interesting one. Maybe I can get an idea. Thanks for dropping by. Sara

Mystic Rose Rose April 7, 2019 at 6:08 AM whenever I read your poetry it makes me want to waltz with you. Off the poetry land we go, thank you for the flow. Love xo

Tom Cunningham April 7, 2019 at 4:40 AM Delightful things like birdsong start our day then a warm drink to warm us up, and these simple things do delight us. Good luck nette. Tom.