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Waltz me gently through morn’s embrace The kettle chimes birdsongs enthrall As rails of dew entwine like lace-- Waltz me gently through morn’s embrace: Vibrant this heart flowing with grace To taste new charms of heaven’s sprawl-- Waltz me gently through morn’s embrace The kettle chimes birdsongs enthrall ! For Brian Strand

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Constance La France

Date: 4/21/2019 5:55:00 PM

Nette, this is a lovely Triolet and would for sure been on the winning list, sorry you did not get to enter it.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/10/2019 9:29:00 PM

Delicious in every aspect, nette! A real winner. ~ gw

M. L. Kiser

Date: 4/10/2019 8:00:00 PM

And what a morning it is! Love the picture, too.

Ralph Sergi

Date: 4/8/2019 7:59:00 AM

Hi nette: I was thrilled with the rhythm oft this poem epitomizing the morning. WELL DONE!

Pashang Salehi

Date: 4/8/2019 6:18:00 AM

Beautifully done...

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 4/8/2019 12:40:00 AM

This one waltzes around with delicacy, diplomacy, and beauty that reminds me of the lovely gowns, gloves, and jewelry too.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/7/2019 2:21:00 PM

- Wonderfully, Nette :) - GL in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/7/2019 1:09:00 PM

Thank you for waltzing all of us gently with this beautiful poem! :) gw

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 4/7/2019 11:35:00 AM

Delightful indeed, hugs and thanks for your visit.

Arturo Michael

Date: 4/7/2019 11:24:00 AM

Lovely...enchanting too...

Joanna Daniel

Date: 4/7/2019 10:20:00 AM

Ah! Beautiful, I love this one, Nette:) Gonna fave it:)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/7/2019 10:10:00 AM

Reads like a good contender to me. I haven't looked at the contest but it reads here like an interesting one. Maybe I can get an idea. Thanks for dropping by. Sara

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 4/7/2019 6:08:00 AM

whenever I read your poetry it makes me want to waltz with you. Off the poetry land we go, thank you for the flow. Love xo

Tom Cunningham

Date: 4/7/2019 4:40:00 AM

Delightful things like birdsong start our day then a warm drink to warm us up, and these simple things do delight us. Good luck nette. Tom.