Delightful Reciprocity Haiku

one with the ocean
the ocean is one with me
delightful indeed
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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July 2, 2015 at 4:56 AM
"All of you agree" should be last line and would be perfect. Don't you agree. Jim Horn
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