Sara Zahed Poet Couplet

Delightful Features

Scribbling on a piece of paper,
I displayed my thoughts that are my treasures…

Lifting my head I saw,
a pure face that so delightful…

I pondered at it for a while….
And saw a smile so wide…

The smile accompanied small eyes
When opened shall make you fly

Those delightful features
Belong to no strangers…

For they rest across my sister's face
Who displays them when the moon's unlaced…

May you shine everyday dearest one…

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Cecil Hickman September 13, 2008 at 3:33 PM beautifully enriched words of endearment for your sister and her beauty, enhancing and not in spite or jealousy, a wonderful write full of vivid imagery and flowing words,,,blessings..Cecil

Mohammad Yamin September 11, 2008 at 4:27 PM Sara, your poem Delightful Features touched my heart. It reflects your deep affection for your sister. An awesome write. It highly impressed me. Thanks for your kind comments on my poem Your Portrait.

Vince Suzadail Jr. September 11, 2008 at 10:23 AM This was nice, sweet, touching. a gift for your sister. Beautifully written. Vince

Michael Jordan September 11, 2008 at 7:14 AM Sara - A wonderful tribute to your sister - I just went down to the City to see my sister and brother (First time we were all together since 1975) and we had a wonderful visit - God Bless