Delightful Elevator Scene
Amidst joyful* spirit, we took our ascent
Toward an appointment my son should not miss
While basking in his cologne with fruity scent
Wafting soothing goodness of sweet freshness bliss…
Then my special child giggled in mirth’s delight*
When I let one loose in the elevator…
Oh, yes; you’ve guessed it right; not due to smell’s blight
But he saw from wheel chair flight --- his fave doctor.
*Isaiah 61:10 I will greatly rejoice in the LORD, my soul shall be joyful in my God…
August 4, 2021
1st place, "A BRIAN STRAND Rime" Poetry Writing Contest
Sponsored by Brian Strand; judged on 8/19/2021.
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