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Delightful Elevator Scene

Amidst joyful* spirit, we took our ascent Toward an appointment my son should not miss While basking in his cologne with fruity scent Wafting soothing goodness of sweet freshness bliss… Then my special child giggled in mirth’s delight* When I let one loose in the elevator… Oh, yes; you’ve guessed it right; not due to smell’s blight But he saw from wheel chair flight --- his fave doctor.
*Isaiah 61:10 I will greatly rejoice in the LORD, my soul shall be joyful in my God… August 4, 2021 1st place, "A BRIAN STRAND Rime" Poetry Writing Contest Sponsored by Brian Strand; judged on 8/19/2021.

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Date: 8/7/2021 7:21:00 PM
What a delightful poem Beata. God bless you!
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Date: 8/4/2021 11:56:00 PM
Oh this is so good Beata, love the humour. Good luck in contest.
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Date: 8/4/2021 5:15:00 AM
Beata, welcome to the elevator squad with your very special poem..Good luck in the contest...Delice
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Date: 8/4/2021 2:02:00 AM
You have turned a humorous topic into a special one, Beata, your faith shines through this one also:)
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