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Delightful Christmas Grounding

Child on Santa's lap
Decorations high
Band playing carols
Girls wrap many gifts
Mall is so crowded

Christmas Spirit
People joyous
Excitement wow,
My legs are tired

Silent Night
A child's laugh
Loud Singing

Turkey
Muffins

Cake

Contest Entry: A Grounding Technique
Sponsor: Sara Kendrick
Dated: 2024/12/11


Placed 1st in contest.

christmasdiminished hexaverse

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Duke Beaufort

December 23, 2024 at 1:19 PM

Jennifer, this reads like a menu for a great time. It's all wonderful, and we just wish that all people could have the joy that you have expressed. We try to do our part! Smiles!

Susan Ashley

December 18, 2024 at 4:57 PM

Dearest Jennifer, my soulful poetry sis, I'm delighted by the hustle, bustle, music, laughter, elation and exhaustion (Excitement wow, My legs are tired) captured in your Christmas poem. Such lively, endearing, holiday spirit and imagery! I love Christmas but I hate the crowded malls haha! Your golden pen shines like a grand treetop star! I wish you and your lovely family a merry Christmas and a happy new year filled with poetry, light and love. Always your devoted fan and adoring poetry sis.. ~Susan

Paula Goldsmith

December 18, 2024 at 8:24 AM

Congratulations on your win. What a wonderful Christmas write. I enjoyed reading it. Have A Very Blessed Merry Christmas..........

Sara Kendrick

December 17, 2024 at 3:54 AM

I want to personally thank you for your entry in my contest. A delightful scene you have described. Congratulations on your winner. Way to go. Sara K

Jennifer Proxenos

December 19, 2024 at 5:28 AM

Sara my friend, it was both an honor and a great pleasure entering this contest. Thank you so much for my win and your lovely words. I hope you and your family have a wonderful Christmas and i wish you every possible blessing Sara. Hugs Jenny

thriveni c mysore

December 16, 2024 at 8:48 PM

muffins!! congratulations dear poet. Cheers

Kim Rodrigues

December 16, 2024 at 2:14 PM

Very nice! Congrats!

Sam Kauffman

December 16, 2024 at 11:05 AM

What a wonderful representative poem of the Christmas season celebrations, my friend! Love that it ends with "cake!" You so effortlessly take me through the season and all the things I look forward to as the season revels itself each year! Best wishes of the contest! Advent blessings of joy to you!

Anne-Lise Andresen

December 16, 2024 at 9:32 AM

- Children's laughter is a lovely picture, dear Jenny ... congratulations :) - hugs

Andrea Dietrich

December 15, 2024 at 8:10 AM

Christmas at the mall. So fun and looks like you landed back home!

Janice Canerdy

December 12, 2024 at 4:09 PM

Jennifer, this is very well-written and delightful. Janice

Heidi Sands

December 12, 2024 at 7:04 AM

Well written Jennifer! Good luck in the contest..I hope you have a Merry Christmas. Hugs :)

Victor Buhagiar

December 11, 2024 at 11:36 AM

Lovely Diminished Hexaverse poem. Never tried it. You did well. Best for a win.

Darlene De Beaulieu

December 11, 2024 at 11:19 AM

Well hello Jennifer, so nice to see you. I enjoyed your Christmas poem. This is the time of year when we enjoy our turkey meal. Merry Christmas. All the best for the New Year. Hugs. /Darlene/