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Delight For Kids

Gracious* love's good treat of no trick's deceit Great kindness-sharing midst candies to eat Grand delight for kids, absolutely sweet Godly hallowed win: selfishness’ defeat.
*Numbers 6:25 The LORD make his face shine upon thee, and be gracious unto thee. October 31, 2019 4th place, "Good Luck Halloween" Poetry Contest Sponsored by Eve Roper; judged on 11/19/2019.

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Date: 11/23/2019 6:37:00 PM
Congrats in the contest, beata.
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Date: 11/20/2019 6:33:00 AM
Nice one, Beata. Congrats on your win. Charlie
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Date: 11/19/2019 11:47:00 PM
Beata, congratulations on your winning placement. Hugs Eve
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Date: 10/31/2019 6:27:00 AM
Wonderfully done. I like the consistency at the beginning of each line too.
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Date: 10/31/2019 5:48:00 AM
Lovely... God bless you, Gina
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