Beata Agustin Poet Rhyme

Delight For Kids

Gracious* love's good treat of no trick's deceit
Great kindness-sharing midst candies to eat
Grand delight for kids, absolutely sweet
Godly hallowed win: selfishness’ defeat.

*Numbers 6:25 The LORD make his face shine upon thee, and be gracious unto thee.

October 31, 2019
4th place, "Good Luck Halloween" Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Eve Roper; judged on 11/19/2019.

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Andrea Dietrich November 23, 2019 at 6:37 PM Congrats in the contest, beata.

Charles Messina November 20, 2019 at 6:33 AM Nice one, Beata. Congrats on your win. Charlie

Eve Roper November 19, 2019 at 11:47 PM Beata, congratulations on your winning placement. Hugs Eve

Caren Krutsinger October 31, 2019 at 6:27 AM Wonderfully done. I like the consistency at the beginning of each line too.

Regina Mcintosh October 31, 2019 at 5:48 AM Lovely... God bless you, Gina