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Delicate Whisper

Delicate whisper Delicate whisper is brought by the favourable wind from the greatest of all breezes I lend my ears To the whisper from the land of love where my bosom love for ever dwells The brightest of a divine whisper grips me when am in the tight tentacles of my dreams let me absorb your whisper sensuality let me absorb your tender love I get my new world of timeless longevity as I feel and breath in your whisper vibrate my heart with your divine fragrance hug me tight with you delicate whisper ~ sukmawati komala~ 14 March 2013

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Date: 3/29/2013 5:47:00 PM
nicely done my dear,,,, coming by to wish you a blessed Easter Sunday ;}
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Date: 3/17/2013 7:15:00 PM
Hello darling, you have such a light touch with your pen. Words you write seem to dance off the page and give the reader a moment of delight. Loved to read this gem! Love, Lizzie
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Date: 3/17/2013 6:17:00 AM
Excellent. Beautifully penned. Enjoyed. Tfs
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Date: 3/15/2013 1:53:00 PM
This is so beautifully written, my dear Sukmawati! A sweet expression of love! Big hugs dear friend, Jack xox
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Date: 3/15/2013 3:02:00 AM
Whew! - This one made got my heart pounding my friend!...'tight tentacles of my dreams'....WOW - Tim
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Date: 3/14/2013 7:47:00 AM
Words like soft down in a beautiful poem Sukmawati! - Love it! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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