Sukmawati Komala Poet Dramatic Monologue

Delicate Whisper

Delicate whisper

Delicate  whisper  is brought 
by the favourable wind 
from the greatest of all breezes

I lend my ears
To the whisper
from the land of love
where my bosom love for ever 
dwells

The brightest of a divine whisper
grips me when am in the 
tight tentacles of my dreams
let me absorb 
your whisper sensuality
let me absorb
your tender love

I get my new world
of timeless longevity 
as I feel
and breath in your whisper

vibrate my heart 
with your divine fragrance
hug me tight 
with you delicate whisper

~ sukmawati komala~
14 March 2013

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Debbie Duncan March 29, 2013 at 5:47 PM nicely done my dear,,,, coming by to wish you a blessed Easter Sunday ;}

Elizabeth Wesley March 17, 2013 at 7:15 PM Hello darling, you have such a light touch with your pen. Words you write seem to dance off the page and give the reader a moment of delight. Loved to read this gem! Love, Lizzie

Ravi Sathasivam March 17, 2013 at 6:17 AM Excellent. Beautifully penned. Enjoyed. Tfs

Jack Ellison March 15, 2013 at 1:53 PM This is so beautifully written, my dear Sukmawati! A sweet expression of love! Big hugs dear friend, Jack xox

Tim Ryerson March 15, 2013 at 3:02 AM Whew! - This one made got my heart pounding my friend!...'tight tentacles of my dreams'....WOW - Tim

Anne-Lise Andresen March 14, 2013 at 7:47 AM Words like soft down in a beautiful poem Sukmawati! - Love it! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)