Delicate Power

Silky mane glistens
Majestic blue cascading
Delicate Power














**Entry for Raul Moreno's Rhythm of the Falls Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Dietrich Avatar
May 29, 2010 at 8:47 PM
another beauty, gosh i have to keep going back farther and farther to find one of yours I've not commented to already!!
K. Avatar
January 2, 2010 at 9:18 AM
This is really nice--I like how you used "mane" to describe the falls, pretty unique--also like the contrast of "delicate power" enjoyed reading this :)
Goff Avatar
October 21, 2009 at 6:52 PM
regal entry! I must say! Kimberly, transcends the contest! jim
Freeman Avatar
October 14, 2009 at 9:43 AM
Amazing Haiku Lady, Sincerely, love, Moses
Brown Avatar
October 11, 2009 at 1:25 PM
Love this write!
Fraser Avatar
October 11, 2009 at 1:17 PM
Beautiful Haiku Kimberly, best of luck in Raul's contest >> James
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October 11, 2009 at 11:51 AM
Interesting use of imagery for a creative view. I really like the opening line. Best wishes in the contest. Thank you for your kind comment. Karen
Owens Avatar
October 10, 2009 at 10:57 PM
This is nice...Good luck on the contest...Marty
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