- Delicate Balance, Divine and Fragile -

Always inside living thoughts 
Once held a vision adoring thee  
Beholding beams though these eyes
Star spangled one look totally breathless  

This heart's calling your name precious
Together uniting  strengths join within power
Making hopes and dreams come alive
Saying onto myself breathtakingly gorgeous 

Adding this truly wonderful music 
Into the soul princess cut deeply singing tunes develop 
In every echo out of this world
I wish to retake the perfect soft breath held 
Melting golden feelings burning gasps warmly sigh 

Why do I love you so 
Wearing the glass slippers 
Fragile as a newborn butterfly taking flight
In all the flowers freshly plucked 
Standing out most beautiful 

A diamond rose stunning dewdrops sparkle 
Touching, kissing, loving you forever more
Holding someone special always showing them
how deeply appreciated they are 

Fireworks display our passion to share
in a world filled promise 
Conveying the love inside each tiny seed
picking you one precious gem 

Your words are sparkling wine
your presence divine 
Your beauty makes me comfortable dizzy
Intoxicating drunken in anything you wish 
becomes the soul command 
In the distance ~ the dying sun forever sleeps with you one dream obeys 







A Collaborated Poem 07.11.2015
Anne-Lise Andresen, and Liam Mc Daid
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Haikutwinkle Avatar
December 12, 2015 at 8:54 AM
oh so many sparkles in your poem....Lol May the faeries keep you safe with their fairy dust
Sewumber Avatar
December 7, 2015 at 2:58 PM
Beautiful poem. Continue.
A  Avatar
December 6, 2015 at 12:56 PM
Beautiful... SKAT
Andresen Avatar
December 6, 2015 at 8:07 AM
- THANKS !!!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Bateman Avatar
December 2, 2015 at 8:46 AM
Outstanding Collaboration here Anne-Lise and Liam!! The words and the imagery most certainly live up to the title of this wonderfully-conceived and radiant write. (Time to wash it all down now with a Stout Glass of the Old Irish My Dear Friends!!) Cheers and Best, Gary
Van Breda Avatar
December 1, 2015 at 8:28 AM
Stunning poem collaboration between two very talented poems. ~~X~~
Petersen Potter Avatar
November 30, 2015 at 4:45 PM
Hi Liam n' Anne Lise!Wow!Wow!This is a most very beautiful, romantic passionate, dreamy and captivating heartfelt love poem you've written here my dearest friends.Just dazzling!So very beautifully written! I truly enjoy it.A true golden gem!Just awesome!Another most very beautiful dreamy sweet romantic passionate heartfelt love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.So very beautiful and sweet.Very enchanting!Just wonderful!I just love it!Excellent imagery!Just superb!Outstanding collaboration!Your pens are truly mighty golden!A 7 + ++ to each! A Fav!Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers Liam.Keep your Faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too.Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light! God bless you always!:)Love n hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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