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Delicacies

...to Juvie With airy tread your footfall makes no sound, as crackl’d leaves bestrew the frozen ground. The lightness of your voice floats on the breeze, its delicacies set my soul at ease. A white-flecked silence hovers o’er the croft and echoes perish, silence settles soft. Weightless and peripheral you flitter ‘twixt snowflakes, and the robin’s cheerful twitter. The beauties of the world are ours to hold, to cherish and to share as they unfold. You pass, as gentle as a soft spring rain, as I behold your beauty once again!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/23/2011 11:52:00 AM
This is beautiful, Keith! One of my favorite adjectives when reading your writes! Feels like a sweet, and subtle tribute to the seasons, and tender farewell to winter. Snow has melted here...mutter mutter..and Spring is arriving..YES! Hope all's well with you...Wishing you and yours the best! Happy Easter!!!! Love, Mikki
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Date: 8/11/2010 4:23:00 AM
wonderful write thank you for your comments sarah x
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Date: 8/10/2010 1:55:00 PM
Smile ~ I remember "Your Precious Jovie;" amid Your more than beautiful poetic treasures my dear friend and, this Jewel here is, just as beautiful as they have always been from Your romantic and gifted pen!!! ~ "Beautiful" ~ "Much Love & Warmth to You & Yours Always," John! ~ Smile, "Have A Very Beautiful & Jovie Day My Friend;" Bye!:) ~
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Date: 8/10/2010 10:35:00 AM
This is a beautiful write. It almost feels so delicate and peaceful that if one were to say something out loud one would disturb the beauty. Enjoyed. :)
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Date: 8/10/2010 10:26:00 AM
Absolutely beautiful Keith. It has been so long since you have posted. Hoping this means you are back writing at the Soup. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/10/2010 9:58:00 AM
Congratulations on having found such happiness, Keith. Best wishes to you both. Nice to see you posting again. Enjoy life, Carolyn
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Date: 8/10/2010 9:47:00 AM
absolutely lovely imagery, well written
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