Deja' Vu

At fast food restaurant where I eat There's man that gives feeling deja' vu Our glances have always been discrete At fast food restaurant where I eat A tete-a'-tete would fuel the heat This tete-a'-tete is long overdue At fast food restaurant where I eat There's man that gives feeling deja'vu Sponsor: Cyndi Macmillan Contest: Write about something French Strickly fiction Don't have program to do French marking or accents...

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/14/2012 5:31:00 AM

A belated congratulations Sara on your placement in Cyndi's "Un, Deux, Trois" contest. Love, Carol

Kathryn Collins

Date: 6/12/2012 9:03:00 AM

Congrats Sara. Never thought a fast-food restaurant would show up en Francais. Love it. Kathy

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 6/12/2012 2:52:00 AM

Big Congrats Sara , this is lovely xx

David Williams

Date: 6/12/2012 2:26:00 AM

Sara congrats on your win, excellent..David

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/22/2012 7:18:00 AM

I am stopping by your poetry to thank you for your kind comments on my writing. It has been a pleasure to read yours today Sara. Love, Carol

Maureen Lefanue

Date: 5/17/2012 11:59:00 PM

Sara, so glad you enjoyed my poem "Time And Chance". Enjoyed your Deja'vu poem - hope you will soon have that tete-a'-tete. It's nice to have someone to talk to when eating. Love & God bless, Maureen

Charles Henderson

Date: 5/14/2012 11:17:00 PM

Very good. Don't have djv a lot, but esp runs in the family.

Harry Horsman

Date: 5/14/2012 3:45:00 PM

at least you have given this contest a go, Sara, and this is an excellent poem in it's own right. harry

David Williams

Date: 5/14/2012 4:18:00 AM

Sara, a great entree, good luck..David

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/14/2012 1:52:00 AM

ahhha sara, love to catch you in a romantic mood... am relishing this with a smile.. lovely!...winning huggs!

John Rhinem

Date: 5/13/2012 7:05:00 PM

Smile ˜ Sooo Soft In Sensual, My Dear Sweeet Beautiful, Beautiful Sara * Tete-A-Tete, As Crossing Through These Corridores In Time To Find, 'Romeo & Juliet's, Once Upon A Time * 'Hush The Castle Doors, My Love; Forevermore;'" John!:) ˜

Date: 5/13/2012 7:08:00 PM

...."A Mesmerizing Favourite In Face To Face; 'Your Beauty.'" *