Deja Vu

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Yesterday, I tuned into my local news channel; Wow, color me surprised... There was news about a shooting! Today, The same news anchor reported About a child shot At some Baltimore street corner; Transported to shock trauma Where he tragically expired. Sad surprise graduates To shock; A trauma to my system. Please, pardon that pun! How upsetting? A child... One foot out of the womb, gone. What the heck!? Tomorrow, Oh I know...I just know... Another shooting will take place, Even if It doesn't make the news. Sickening deja vu Piled atop another, and another! Deja Vu Poetry Contest Sponsored by Unseeking Seeker Date written: 02/24/2023

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Date: 3/11/2023 10:14:00 PM

I am afraid, that I cant agree with the premise that guns don't shoot people, its people that shoot people. If no one had guns, except getting shot with a bow and arrow, no one would get shot. In Australia our gun laws are not perfect. but on average since our laws in 1996 there have been NO mass shootings and 1 in 100,000 people a year die of gun shot wounds including police shootings suicide unintentional shots fired and homicide. Gun laws work. Keep up the fight. Your caring nature shines through in your poetry Edward, it is admired.

Edward Ibeh
Date: 3/12/2023 8:57:00 AM

Thank you for your wonderful visit and I really appreciate your perspective, Wendy:-) Blessings, xoxo.

Aysha Nuwas

Date: 2/24/2023 4:21:00 PM

I saw that on the news, you have expressed this well. Lovely poem.

Edward Ibeh
Date: 2/25/2023 6:15:00 PM

Thank you very much, Aysha:-) God bless.