Deja Vu

Is time the greatest illusion I’m not waiting around to see Deja vu causes confusion so many echos from eternity My birth a mere occlusion from a past life I broke free Deja vu works in collusion with most supreme entities Previous cycles of allusion came pouring back to me Deja vu and mass delusion nervous breakdown maybe Since my latest convolution visions show where I must be Inside a mental institution a revelation No! you all agree Deja vu contest Sponsored By unseeking seeker 02/20/23

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I Am Anaya

Date: 2/22/2023 7:33:00 PM

...and with no explanation, out of the blue, could it be a nudge at our brain, a specific pattern, a foggy notion waiting for exposure. I think deja vu is terrifying! Intriguing write, B0L!

I Am Anaya
Date: 2/23/2023 7:11:00 PM

A little bit off kilter, emotionally, can cause sputtering, and encodes an image twice in quick succession. According to one neurologist!

David Kavanagh
Date: 2/23/2023 10:38:00 AM

There goes the question Anaya, this one is not really suited for the contest, but I can only write my own opinions on Deja vu you’re right it can be quite an unsettling experience, and one could very easily end up in a sanatorium if it was to happen every day, thanks so much for stopping by, cheers David

Tom Cunningham

Date: 2/20/2023 4:02:00 AM

Think we've all experienced de ju vu moments David can't stand wearing a tie and With my keen interest in the old American west maybe I was hung as a desparado lol. Good luck in the contest, enjoy your week ahead. Tom

David Kavanagh
Date: 2/20/2023 5:10:00 AM

I’m not a tie man either Tom, perhaps it was the guillotine for me, or the samurai sword, have a good week too, cheers David

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 2/20/2023 1:37:00 AM

I hope you're not in a sanitarium. Fiction, I'm sure, but well written.

David Kavanagh
Date: 2/20/2023 3:29:00 AM

Lol No! but probably was in a previous cycle of life Victor, it’s a pretty insane world we live in, cheers David

Aysha Nuwas

Date: 2/19/2023 9:54:00 PM

I enjoyed reading this poem!

David Kavanagh
Date: 2/20/2023 12:17:00 AM

Thank you Aysha I appreciate you stopping by, cheers David