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Deicide

'cause some of us have had enough of this hell some search heaven for redemption and she too but more for being disgusted and when she up there arrived stabbed to death the deity and on the way down she smiles in the ecstasy of having avenged the human race and all its offspring condemning to finitude who has not condemned us to eternity.

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Date: 3/5/2022 4:31:00 PM
(chuckling) I like this very much, Marco. Sometimes I feel like she did, but I wouldn't have the courage. I did notice that after the deed "on the way down she smiles." Good writing, my friend.
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Marco Chies
Date: 3/5/2022 4:40:00 PM
Thanks, Milton.

Book: Shattered Sighs