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Degradation

She loved a man who, in their early days, romanced her and was quick with lofty praise. Due to his love, life bore a rosy hue. Does this sound too near-perfect to be true? Was it a dream? Soon Paradise was lost. His heart grew cold, and hers would pay the cost. Her efforts drowned in his indifference; each day became progressively more tense. He used degrading words that broke her heart and spirit. Once he’d torn her world apart, he left, concluding her long stint in hell. Will she recover? Only time will tell. October 5, 2021 Contest: This or That, vol 7--Degradation Placed 4th Sponsor: Edward Ibeh

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Date: 10/11/2021 9:39:00 PM
Hello Janice ... a sad tale that is so often occurring in reality. Well written and rhymed - thank you Janice - Lindsay
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Date: 10/9/2021 9:18:00 AM
Heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful poem, Janice:-) Peace and love
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 10/9/2021 3:14:00 PM
Edward, thanks so much for sponsoring and for my win! Janice
Date: 10/9/2021 9:08:00 AM
He wasn't worth as much as her little finger, funny how some guys think they have it all, misguided beings! She should be glad she is rid of him, her heart will heal, imagine if he ever married her, poor girl! Well penned Janice. Jugs blessings, Jennifer.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 10/9/2021 3:14:00 PM
Thanks so much, Jennifer. Janice
Date: 10/6/2021 4:31:00 AM
This happens quite often. Some relationships are not worth saving. You described it well, Janice.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 10/6/2021 3:23:00 PM
Thanks so much, Vijay. Janice
Date: 10/6/2021 2:13:00 AM
Many start off that way Janice but then they turn and the relationship becomes hell, good luck in the contest. Tom
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 10/6/2021 3:23:00 PM
Thanks so much, Tom. Janice

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