Degradation

She loved a man who, in their early days,
romanced her and was quick with lofty praise.
Due to his love, life bore a rosy hue.
Does this sound too near-perfect to be true? 

Was it a dream? Soon Paradise was lost.
His heart grew cold, and hers would pay the cost. 
Her efforts drowned in his indifference;
each day became progressively more tense.

He used degrading words that broke her heart
and spirit. Once he’d torn her world apart,
he left, concluding her long stint in hell.
Will she recover? Only time will tell.


October 5, 2021
Contest: This or That, vol 7--Degradation      Placed 4th
Sponsor: Edward Ibeh
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Laurie Avatar
October 11, 2021 at 9:39 PM
Hello Janice ... a sad tale that is so often occurring in reality. Well written and rhymed - thank you Janice - Lindsay
Ibeh Avatar
October 9, 2021 at 9:18 AM
Heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful poem, Janice:-) Peace and love
Canerdy Avatar
October 9, 2021 at 3:14 PM
Edward, thanks so much for sponsoring and for my win! Janice
Proxenos Avatar
October 9, 2021 at 9:08 AM
He wasn't worth as much as her little finger, funny how some guys think they have it all, misguided beings! She should be glad she is rid of him, her heart will heal, imagine if he ever married her, poor girl! Well penned Janice. Jugs blessings, Jennifer.
Canerdy Avatar
October 9, 2021 at 3:14 PM
Thanks so much, Jennifer. Janice
Pandit Avatar
October 6, 2021 at 4:31 AM
This happens quite often. Some relationships are not worth saving. You described it well, Janice.
Canerdy Avatar
October 6, 2021 at 3:23 PM
Thanks so much, Vijay. Janice
Cunningham Avatar
October 6, 2021 at 2:13 AM
Many start off that way Janice but then they turn and the relationship becomes hell, good luck in the contest. Tom
Canerdy Avatar
October 6, 2021 at 3:23 PM
Thanks so much, Tom. Janice
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