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The crumbling of humanity is developing. Burglary, deception, and hubris are ubiquitous. Money is being earned by cheating. These areas are known to be perilous. The vast majority of the cash is made in the wild. It's time to settle in the matured and infirm. Ravenous experts age their vigor after a while. Laborers are escaping devout neediness squirm. Frantic individuals have weakened. Fellowship has no kin, just sex bind unify. Keeping guardians is an idea antiquated. Notwithstanding savagery, humankind decay. The mutilation and murder of living persons, Assaulting, beating captives till they die or be deaf. They induce their casualties lives blackens. The cruelest rulers of the hells they bereft. Psyche attacking compassion and adoring. Time talks just nibble and severity. Wild evil presences masked as a sacred being. Blamelessness in the midst of a corrupt divinity. Virtue blurs to a deadly chase in the wind. No one realizes who prowls crimson vine. Is this acculturated? a pooled grind. Alert, my friends, inquire into thine.
Written: September 9, 2021 This or That, Vol 7 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Edward Ibeh

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Date: 10/13/2021 8:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Your "Degradation" is a wonderful write. Have a blessed day with your win...............
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Date: 10/10/2021 8:07:00 AM
Beautiful! I love this line: "Virtue blurs to a deadly chase in the wind..."Congratulations on first.!
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Date: 10/9/2021 10:09:00 PM
Sharp exposure to the current scenario. Great writing. Congratulations!
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Date: 10/9/2021 11:55:00 AM
Another very fine write from your impressive portfolio, Lasaad. Such powerful lines like, "Virtue blurs to a deadly chase in the wind." A searing image + message. Congratulations! Best wishes, Brian
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Date: 10/9/2021 11:44:00 AM
BIG congrats on your first place in Edward's contest, Lasaad. Your thoughts amply illustrate the degradation taking place around us.
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Date: 10/9/2021 9:47:00 AM
Such truthful thoughts are in your lines, Lasaad. Congratulations on your write.
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Date: 10/9/2021 10:03:00 AM
Thank you so much, Jenna, appreciate your reading and commenting.
Date: 10/9/2021 8:58:00 AM
Heartiest congratulations on your top win in my contest with this exceptional piece, Lasaad:-) Peace and love
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Date: 10/9/2021 10:02:00 AM
Thank you so much, Edward, for your kindness and for reading and placing my poem. It means a lot to me.
Date: 9/9/2021 1:10:00 PM
You captured degradation of mankind well Lasaad, we're supposed to be the intelligent species here on earth but all too often we hear of crimes of inhumanity being committed. Its really a sad and evil world we live in. Tom
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Date: 9/9/2021 2:16:00 PM
Thank you so much for your beautiful and inspiring message; truly, my friend, things are changing so quickly that we can't even conceive how the world will be in 10 or 20 years.
Date: 9/9/2021 12:36:00 PM
Excellent work Lasaad, very well written in the inimitable style you have developed, a lot of these issues about the human condition I try to embed in my own poems, there are no solutions, other than what nature holds up its sleeve, I'm just glad I live in a democracy, it's not perfect but offers a chance, with a certain amount of accountability to all, cheers David
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Date: 9/9/2021 2:19:00 PM
We really appreciate the powerful and encouraging message you conveyed to us, David. Things are really changing swiftly, and we can't even imagine what the world will be like in another decade or two. While we are thankful for our way of life, we witness all the chaos in the world and it makes us realize how fortunate we are.
Date: 9/9/2021 12:34:00 PM
You present some very interesting thoughts here, Lasaad. "Notwithstanding savagery, humankind decay." So true.
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Date: 9/9/2021 2:20:00 PM
Thank you very much, Milton.
Date: 9/9/2021 12:07:00 PM
Wonderful writing. God bless you. Love, Gina
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Date: 9/9/2021 12:26:00 PM
Thank you so much, Gina; I'm overjoyed by this lovely message from a skilled poetess.

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