Shanity Rain Poet Free verse

Defying Odds

To take a risk and live trying 
  always resume positive thinking
    with reasonable doubt inquiring 
      making love instead of secretly dying
       
For what is life living with a lover lying
 compelling fears and tears co signing
  starting over is better then a fear stagnant enables crying
   significant meaning to true love endless passions defining  
     
  ~searching the soul for answers never resigning ~

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Anne-Lise Andresen May 20, 2014 at 12:39 PM - Nice to see you, Shanity ..... long time since I've seen you - Glad you have a beautiful and deep poem that I had not already read - Hope all is well with you. - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Shanity Rain May 28, 2014 at 10:40 PM Thank-you Angel..you are still so full of love !

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri May 12, 2014 at 12:28 AM An engaging poem written in a sensational style n wording! Enjoyable exhortation to romancing, wow. Tc. Shanity Rain May 20, 2014 at 12:22 PM Thank-you for this sweet compliment!

Liam Mcdaid March 1, 2014 at 6:05 PM deep beautifully penned dearest friend Shanity Rain May 20, 2014 at 12:23 PM Thank-you my very talented Irish Poet !

Joseph Matose January 14, 2014 at 11:36 AM In love, the truth must be told. This is a great lesson to liars out there. I enjoyed your write. Thanks for sharing it. JM Shanity Rain May 20, 2014 at 12:24 PM Thank-you Joseph, I love your beautiful penned words.

Monterey Sirak January 14, 2014 at 7:44 AM 777777's You always hear people say they will do something or die trying, but it is so much more positive to say I will live trying. Shanity Rain January 14, 2014 at 11:26 AM Amen ! My Friend !