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Defying Facial Mask

Amid disdain of society’s mask That curse of age questioned like it was dearth We hide real image, afraid to be asked Allowing fashion to control our worth. Youth’s potion sells high on retail market Fools we are, wasting hours for vain signs, Defying true beauty to walk the red carpet Instead of giving love to life that shines. So what if few laugh lines are more cherished Age is a treasure relishing more thrills, Exploring new joys ripened to nourish The raw passion raging through seasons’ chills. What's facelifts for when heart can wonder How to fight for a cause and seize new dreams, When bold trials are baked in fire’s hunger Chasing stars at thirty, ready to steam! Nancy Jones' Contest: This is How Life Feels When You Get to Be My Age
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Ramage Avatar
August 21, 2012 at 8:06 PM
Nicely done Nette. Congratulations on your win. Lee
Brown Avatar
August 21, 2012 at 7:13 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Nette. Love, Carol
Jones Avatar
August 19, 2012 at 4:24 PM
Yo, netteski, netteski. This po reminds me of my own personal experience... I spent the ENTIRE year of 39 simply DREADING turning 40. Then I turned 40 and it was the best thing that ever happened to me! I kinda regret that whole year spent in dread... Great po as always, sistah, and I still need your mailing address for your win in my last 'test if you want your t-shirt. Big love, namaste ~N
Williams Avatar
August 19, 2012 at 2:06 AM
Nette, belated congrats on your win...David
Beck Avatar
August 18, 2012 at 1:23 AM
Hey Young N another masterly concoction of words and a well deserved win........poignant contrast powerfully exposed in each verse, and an underlying philos which is filled with common sense....well written ....I enjoyed reading it.....best w....... KC
Kendrick Avatar
July 31, 2012 at 11:20 AM
Age doesn't bring wrinkles but everyone will gain character lines..Some more than others..Enjoyed reading your work based on truth and the way our society has gone..Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara
Squyres Avatar
July 30, 2012 at 12:33 PM
I cherish each wrinkle and smile line !! Vanity seems to be the rule of thumb in this generation....I choose to gracefully age. I like your poem and the topic...Chase them stars !!!
Ink-U-Script Avatar
July 29, 2012 at 10:22 PM
Ahhh...love the emotions that I get from reading this piece of art you have written here..excellent views!!! Huggs!!! :)
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July 29, 2012 at 8:57 PM
Thank you Nette.. for caring about my blues.. but, my blues come and go... But, yesterday I was in full throttle pain... YIKERSSS!!. I'm feeling wonderful now.....I just got my molar pulled out... ha ha ..by me..... I was in pain for 2 days... anyways ~ i don't know about the face lift.. but, i need me a new tooth... JK... xox~pd
Sivey Avatar
July 29, 2012 at 6:19 PM
What an expressive and delightful write this one is my friend! I truly love your awesome attention to life and what we have to live for! It's certainly not those creams or miracle cures to save our faces from aging! We don't need those! Terrific piece covering this fantastic subject! What a wonderful write! Great Work!!
Andresen Avatar
July 29, 2012 at 3:37 PM
Hi nette, it is almost full moon....good inspiration for sweet poets!!! - Well done !!! - Have a beautiful NEW week ! - big hug / Anne-Lise :)
Andresen Avatar
July 29, 2012 at 3:42 PM
My is not for the contest Nette - Thank you for visit and comments, oxox love/always
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