Lonna Blodgett Poet Iambic Pentameter

Defrosting Kindness

White sheets rattle in surging winds billowed free
I fly suspended dangling from stars dancing
Moon cajoles like my father laughing at me
Butterflies land in swarms gathering goodness 
Pouring syrup on waffles honeyed sweetness

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Suzette Richards October 10, 2023 at 9:47 AM Your email address, please, as I will be sending a PDF per the details on the contest page. Regards, Suzette

Kim Rodrigues October 6, 2023 at 2:55 PM Dreamlike for sure! Congratulations! Lonna Blodgett October 9, 2023 at 10:40 AM Thank you so much Kim. Health and Happiness to you. Lonna

Suzette Richards October 6, 2023 at 1:31 AM Congratulations, Lonna. Thank you for supporting my Hypnagogic Dream contest. In order to claim your prize of the book, DOWNTOWN – Poetic Devices, please soup mail me your e-mail address. Regards, Suzette Lonna Blodgett October 9, 2023 at 10:39 AM Thank you Suzette! Appreciate the opportunity. Blessings, Lonna

Ink Empress September 9, 2023 at 4:48 AM How beautiful and deep is this. I love the imagery and rhymes here, especially, “ moon cajoles” “dangling from stars” “honeyed sweetness” stunning word weaving. Pleasure reading this Lonna Blodgett September 11, 2023 at 6:50 PM I am humbled and happy that you enjoyed it. Lonna