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Defrosting Kindness

White sheets rattle in surging winds billowed free I fly suspended dangling from stars dancing Moon cajoles like my father laughing at me Butterflies land in swarms gathering goodness Pouring syrup on waffles honeyed sweetness

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Date: 10/10/2023 9:47:00 AM
Your email address, please, as I will be sending a PDF per the details on the contest page. Regards, Suzette
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Date: 10/6/2023 2:55:00 PM
Dreamlike for sure! Congratulations!
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 10/9/2023 10:40:00 AM
Thank you so much Kim. Health and Happiness to you. Lonna
Date: 10/6/2023 1:31:00 AM
Congratulations, Lonna. Thank you for supporting my Hypnagogic Dream contest. In order to claim your prize of the book, DOWNTOWN – Poetic Devices, please soup mail me your e-mail address. Regards, Suzette
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 10/9/2023 10:39:00 AM
Thank you Suzette! Appreciate the opportunity. Blessings, Lonna
Date: 9/9/2023 4:48:00 AM
How beautiful and deep is this. I love the imagery and rhymes here, especially, “ moon cajoles” “dangling from stars” “honeyed sweetness” stunning word weaving. Pleasure reading this
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 9/11/2023 6:50:00 PM
I am humbled and happy that you enjoyed it. Lonna

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