Defrosting At Will

let my mind be cool as fridge
keeping temper cool all day
and wisdom nutrient intact
defrosting at will

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Hitendra Mehta
Mar 2011
For Members contest - Magnet Marvel by Linda-Marie The Sweetheart of P.S.
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Konos Avatar
April 12, 2011 at 7:29 AM
unique, well thought out...charming....love it...so thanks...Judy
Dietrich Avatar
March 16, 2011 at 7:57 AM
Great way to see life, hitendra. and yes, that was pure fiction on the sonnet I wrote! LUv, andrea
Devonshire Avatar
March 11, 2011 at 3:12 PM
Stunning poem, Hitendra, and so timely on the Soup right now. There are some tempers here that need to be chilled. Wishing you success in the contest! Love, Carolyn
Tacito Avatar
March 9, 2011 at 8:23 AM
Fantastic!! :)
Mehta Avatar
March 9, 2011 at 7:18 AM
Aha, defrosting at will, nice nalogy with good images, Hitendra
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