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Defrocked By the Dark

When I reached the surface I could smell their fear From the depths of my dark they could sense I'm near Their azure blue skies turned to darken sulky clouds My cawing cacophony of followers, voiced their loud Oh what pleasure it gave me knowing they'd find my goal The darkened seeker sought, the last angel on their scrolls Commotion, confusion abounded, taken to me was she Silence was heard in her wings, now kneeling in front of me Eyes of solemn righteous, now attract this leader of dark As I stare into her pearly white, she views my wanting stark To me now close in touch, thunderous clouds applaud my caress Lightning strikes as I enter her world, in fall, her wings undress Defrocked, taken forsaken, an incredible darkness now descends Such power will emit when I surface again, can any race contend <*>

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 6/20/2014 12:17:00 PM
Ahhhhhh just wonderful ... Great poem ... I love the title...love Jayne x
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James Fraser
Date: 6/24/2014 3:13:00 PM
There's something about writing Dark poetry that gets my mind going :) x
Date: 6/6/2014 11:32:00 AM
I like this too, interesting profound, and extremely well written
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James Fraser
Date: 6/6/2014 2:10:00 PM
Thank you Geordie Boy for your kind words :)
Date: 6/4/2014 4:50:00 PM
intriguing kind of darkness like a hunter, dear prince... eerie and beautifully worded.. huggs
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James Fraser
Date: 6/5/2014 1:50:00 PM
Thank you Princess (((( xx )))) there's something about writing dark poetry that gets my imagination going, James :)
Date: 6/4/2014 4:26:00 PM
Heavy, but interesting.
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James Fraser
Date: 6/5/2014 12:53:00 PM
Many thanks Mark. I enjoyed writing dark pieces, James :)

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