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Definition of a Point

Pointing her index finger towards me, with a frown asked the young fair lady, "Do you know the definition of points?" To me it was a big disappointment. At that point among us ,the back benchers, a discussion about lovers' point was 'on' there, it was then the question was thrown to me, "Answer must be to the point"yelled she! Various points were coming to my mind then, did she ask for 'point' or 'points' in question? No point in asking her to repeat it, started thinking about the point(s) little bit. Seeing me blank and pointless till then, one of the friend poke my back with pointed pen, along it came a whisper in my ear, "to pinpoint the answer you just look at her!" As I looked at her reddened and angry face, the answer came to my mind with a sudden flash, "Madam,a point is a dimensionless slender dot, just like your little cute beauty spot!" =============================== Placement:7th Contest:What's the point? Sponsor:Paula Swanson By:kashinath karmakar(14th January 2011)

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Date: 2/25/2011 2:50:00 AM
Congrats on your win! You seem to be a wonderful writer, good luck on all your future writes luv ~Virginia
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Date: 1/25/2011 4:15:00 AM
Congrats Kashinath on big win with this 'pointed' creative one. Was away travelling hence delay in wishing. Luv / Best wishes Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 1/21/2011 1:31:00 PM
good wishes Kashinath on the placment.
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Date: 1/21/2011 12:25:00 PM
Hi Kashinath - Congratulations on your WIN in Paula's contest. Best wishes, KC
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Date: 1/21/2011 11:57:00 AM
Congrats Kashinath on your wonderful win in Paula's contest with this extraordinary entry.. u sure made the point in your awesome lines my friend... enjoy another chart topper with luv..
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Date: 1/21/2011 11:51:00 AM
Congrats, Kashinath. Well deserved. Enjoyed. Nice going. Ralph
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Date: 1/21/2011 10:34:00 AM
Congratulations onn the well deserved win in the contest, kashinath
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Date: 1/21/2011 10:15:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Paula's "Point" Contest, Kashinath. Always, Annalise
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Date: 1/21/2011 9:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Kashinath in the "What's The Point" contest by Paula Swanson. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/17/2011 1:08:00 PM
This is adorable and so well written to use "point" in many different forms. Loved your last line. What woman's heart wouldn't melt upon hearing that? Wishing you success in Paula's contest. I kept trying to write for this contest, but my efforts were pointless. LOL Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/17/2011 4:07:00 AM
Awell written and funny poem with a "point"! Enjoyed the read today, Kashinath! Wish you best of success in the contest!...Gert
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Date: 1/16/2011 3:06:00 AM
Clever how you have taken the prompt in this write, love the way you used it in varied ways throughout the write without getting away from the original point of writing. Well done, should gain your a good few points... good luck for the contest, and thanks for your most welcome comments on my writing!
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Date: 1/15/2011 2:50:00 AM
This sure got me laughing aloud, Kashinath-- haha very witty-- well I hope you scored major points for that! I hope this scores high-- wish you the best in the contest :) -- nikko :)
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Date: 1/14/2011 8:10:00 PM
oops forgot to do it .hahaha
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Date: 1/14/2011 8:09:00 PM
oh,my , this is close to genius when I think that you are not a native English speaker. I mean, to understand all the subtle differences of the word Point and then to come to this striking final stanza. This is just wonderful, Kasinath. a big 7 rating for this one. LUv, Andrea
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