Defeating the Brutality

Defeating the Brutality 

In a civilized world where people,
Even share the grief of their enemies
And write Poems and Songs 
When they are in pains and 
Are surrounded by sorrowful happenings. 

The soldiers of Pakistan army
Have beheaded the Indian soldiers
In disguise and have eloped
In the darkness of cowardice.

What a bravery they have shown
Making a mockery of Geneva Convention
As, such human aspects
Have no meaning for such an army
Which believes in brutal killings only.

My nation is shocked and 
The world is bewildered 
To see this brutal act of cowardice
But those who have done this
Barbaric act
Are laughing in their dark chambers
As they believe in
Barbaric cruelty and 
A denial of such acts
As not accepting a things 
Is the best remedy
To befool the world.

Ravindra  
10th Jan. 2013

http://www.timesnow.tv/INDIA/Martyred-jawans-honoured/videoshow/4418578.cms


http://www.bbc.co.uk/news/world-asia-20957136

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Date: 1/13/2014 7:53:00 AM
This is when poetry is at it's best. It is important to use our words to speak out to the world and you have done it marvelously. If you have a chance look up my poem Girl Rising, the sequel is Boy Sitting. I believe you would appreciate both of them.
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Ravindra K Kapoor
Date: 1/13/2014 8:10:00 AM
Thanks Richard for finding this Poem befitting to express the feelings of all those who believe in humanity. It would be my pleasure to read your Poem" Girl Rising...Ï will see it hopefully in a short while my friend. With best wishes..Ravindra K Kapoor
Date: 5/29/2013 2:07:00 AM
i so very agree with you why me alone every Indian agrees with your this one, very well composed
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Date: 4/1/2013 5:30:00 AM
I join you Ravi, in condemning the savage atrocities done against your people. The world is in a sorry state and there seems no end to the sorrows that helpless people have to bear. Your statement touched me. Love,Lizzie
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Ravindra K Kapoor
Date: 4/1/2013 11:01:00 AM
Thanks a lot Elizabeth. Your words always worked like a soothing balm. More on your Poem.
Date: 3/6/2013 6:35:00 PM
Dear Ravi, why must we tolerate brutality and the savage killing of so many. It is happening all over the world and I'm sure it is not ordinary citizenry doing the damage. We have never had peace on this sad earth and your poem reminds us all to love our neighbor as ourselves. Love, Elizabeth PS Congrats on your son't wedding; must have been a wonderful occasion.
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Date: 1/17/2013 9:28:00 AM
thank you for this poem, Ravindra, it needed to be written, needed to be read....
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Ravindra K Kapoor
Date: 1/17/2013 1:24:00 PM
Thanks Harry for all your kind wonderful words. Your words have given lot of strengthen to bring before the world "What a heinous crime the soldiers of Pakistan army have done by beheading two Indian soldiers in disguise and by taking away the head of one of the soldier on LOC Thank you my friend for reading this Poem. More on your page...
Date: 1/12/2013 4:56:00 AM
Very powerful verse, my friend...you are absolutly on target when you speak about these cowards and the Geneva Convention...such things have no meaning to them...all they want is chaos and ruin - Tim
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Ravindra K Kapoor
Date: 1/12/2013 9:27:00 AM
Thanks Tim for your kind words and for the true evaluation such people who are trying to befool the world. Taking away the head of a soldier is the most heinous crime these people have done, but this is not for the first time. They are befooling the world for over last sixty years in the name of Kashmir which is an integral part of India, if you see the history of even 2500 BC. More on yr page…
Date: 1/10/2013 1:01:00 AM
Don't worry. The one's they do not fool are more important than the one's whom they do. I do not portend to know the reasons why evil has to happen but i know there will be justice one day. We have to have comfort in our faith no matter what or whom it is in.
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Ravindra K Kapoor
Date: 1/10/2013 3:31:00 AM
Thanks Charles. I am so grateful for all the support to stop such acts of cowardice and brutality, as is it not for the first time that this has happened. Ravindra
Date: 1/9/2013 9:56:00 PM
Good morning dear Ravindra... a very great dedication..thank you very much for sharing you brilliant thought..:)wishing you all the best :) luv and hugs :) SK
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Ravindra K Kapoor
Date: 1/9/2013 10:33:00 PM
Thanks Suk Thanks for all your kind words...Ravindra
Date: 1/9/2013 9:55:00 PM
oh my, that was horrific what they did. And thankfully there are poets like you out there to bring it to light. I am sorry for those poor Indian soldiers this happened to, Ravindra. Your poem was very well done.
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Ravindra K Kapoor
Date: 1/9/2013 10:32:00 PM
Thanks my friend for your kind words. More on your page soon..
Date: 1/9/2013 9:41:00 PM
This Poem is dedicated to those Indian soldiers who have lost their lives in the hands of brutality.
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