Defeated By One With Audio

Many nights after days passed unmeasurably.
Colourful Green grasses died by winter.
Mine hopes come at the door of unhappiness.
I wonder and think .
How beautiful time left me for making love with sorrows and sufferings.

Sunshine glamour caused song of birds sing.
Stopping of them resembles me.
I fall under like thunder.
Blockade and Blockade in my paths.
How brutally the cars fired!
Only I see but can't move an inch.

Shouting noon amazed Lazy afternoon.
Ripples of thoughts crawl from breast to breast.
Lots of questions, not found an Answer.
Nothing I have
Just a gift, a full night sleep.



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September 10, 2017 at 6:19 AM
Greetings, Mahmud. You have a splendid way of bringing out words to life. Congrats for having your work featured in the PoetrySoup homepage!! :-)
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August 23, 2017 at 1:29 AM
I like your poem a lot. Especially the last line. I do have a question though about the capitals you give some words throughout your lines, I was wondering if they have a purpose? Welcome to PoetrySoup :)
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