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Defeat Our Fears

I want you in the sunshine and the rain on every day to defeat the pain. I need you around me surround me beneath me above me. I want you in the winter during the fall through the spring and hot summer through the seasons all. I need you to hold my hand let’s make a stand let us fight the tears let us defeat our fears. (click on the pic to preview my poetry book!)

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Date: 1/8/2021 5:20:00 PM
I love this poem. You could take it any way you want does the person need another person, does the person need God, does the person need something else?The last verse is the best for me because I had so many fears to conquer and had to stand on my own two feet to do so. I think the way you wrote it leaves the reader to interpret it for their own needs ..great work.
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Rob Levasseur
Date: 1/9/2021 8:17:00 AM
Thanks very much Evelyn. You actually helped me see another way to interpret my own poem. Now that's something!
Date: 1/8/2021 11:38:00 AM
united we stand, divided we fall...good concept to have, to stand with others as support - but never let them drag you under, a person needs to know when to let go to save themselves.
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Rob Levasseur
Date: 1/8/2021 12:07:00 PM
Spot on analysis.

Book: Shattered Sighs