Defeat

Crushing defeat,
failure beneath my feet.
How will I rise to my feet . . . broken, 
I am on my knees. 
Failure hits my heart like a knife piercing through my skin,
like a fire removing flesh 
Believe me, there is hell on earth 
There is no rising sun today, only black thick clouds covering my soul. 
Fighting the storm in my head playing a familiar song "you can't win "
the drumming grows louder each time the voice sings  'you can't win"
I have given my pain wings to fly.
Only defeat can hear me cry
I am praying for the rising sun to remove the darkness from my eyes so I can hear the glory of the morning singing a new song of 
hope ..."I shall win"
defeat will die 
The sun will rise  
I will smile.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Lee Sr. Avatar
February 12, 2020 at 10:16 AM
Brilliant write, and so shall we rise up above all odds... together strong we shall go on.... miss your creativity Be blessed James
Cunningham Avatar
January 25, 2020 at 10:38 AM
Life throws many obstacles at us and sometimes we feel defeated but we never give up. We live to fight another day. Tom
Stewart Avatar
January 25, 2020 at 10:42 AM
and so we will...my friend
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