Deer Dawn

ears pricked on full alert
deer transfixed in morning mist
ice cracks the silence
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Rodrigues Avatar
March 13, 2023 at 7:39 PM
I like this one!
Bell Avatar
March 13, 2023 at 9:42 AM
Always think the deer gets a raw deal.
Rees Avatar
March 13, 2023 at 9:56 AM
You’re quite right Paul.
La France Avatar
March 13, 2023 at 8:46 AM
Peter, so visual, perfect haiku, but I am so sad for the deer, sorry I am an animal lover, blessings, Constance
Rees Avatar
March 13, 2023 at 11:22 AM
Poem re-worded. Please take a look.
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