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Deer Dawn

ears pricked on full alert deer transfixed in morning mist ice cracks the silence

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 3/13/2023 7:39:00 PM
I like this one!
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Date: 3/13/2023 9:42:00 AM
Always think the deer gets a raw deal.
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Peter Rees
Date: 3/13/2023 9:56:00 AM
You’re quite right Paul.
Date: 3/13/2023 8:46:00 AM
Peter, so visual, perfect haiku, but I am so sad for the deer, sorry I am an animal lover, blessings, Constance
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Peter Rees
Date: 3/13/2023 11:22:00 AM
Poem re-worded. Please take a look.

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