Deepness of My Heart

In the deepest veins of my heart
Love and passion
flowing like a river

( My first haiku)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Huggins Avatar
August 26, 2009 at 4:14 PM
Thanks you so much everyone!!!! Really made my day!!!
Adeite Avatar
August 22, 2009 at 7:42 AM
This is a wonderful, awesome piece; I love every bit of it. You are such a great poet. Please keep writing and congrats on your poem being featured this week. Hope to read more of your wonderful poems. You are great friend! Adeleke
Kendrick Avatar
August 19, 2009 at 12:19 PM
Nicely written featured Haiku. Keep writing. Sara
Christian Avatar
August 19, 2009 at 5:03 AM
congratulations on your featured poem, God bless you from diane
Richards Avatar
August 18, 2009 at 3:15 PM
A wonderful first introduction to Haiku!! Good for you, Sabrina! ~ Carrie
Fraser Avatar
August 18, 2009 at 12:23 PM
Congratulations on being featured, kool Haiku Sabrina>>James
Brown Avatar
August 17, 2009 at 4:47 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Sabrina. Love Carol
Huggins Avatar
July 21, 2009 at 8:50 AM
Thanks you guys!
Pickett Avatar
July 21, 2009 at 12:10 AM
pretty good #1.....:JP)
Cooper Avatar
July 20, 2009 at 10:15 PM
i love your work sabrina...and welcome to poetrysoup.com and I hope that you enjoy..
Huggins Avatar
July 20, 2009 at 8:45 PM
Thanks alot!
Meadows Avatar
July 20, 2009 at 8:42 PM
this is a good first haiku
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