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Deepest Thought

deep thoughts travel through my mind 
all i remember is a bunch of neverminds
if love is in and out of her body 
ill wait until i find that special somebody
some say sex is complex if so
love me nevertheless
love is war and war backwards 
is raw you should only love when you're 
(R)ead(A)nd(W)illing 
if love is only cover deep
well read it and weep
lust is just a quick bust
real love is never rushed

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 12/21/2011 3:42:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Jared. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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