Deepest of Love.....

The wonders of the stars hide in your eyes
The charm of your sweet desire fires me 
You look into my heart with a want
Your kiss upon my lips dances with intrigue
I feel free to be I, in your arms I am at one
My thoughts ponder on what you have done 
A tune of lovers composition is what I find
A melody played in time forever in our minds
A knowing of growing old beside you and I
Touch that is wrapped in a lustful ribbon
A bonding so tight as we embrace all through the night
Sharing of thoughts spoken in laughter 
Drinking of wine as we lay naked entwined
The magical moments I keep close
As it is all of you that makes my heart enchanted 
For it is the deepest of love that I admire within you

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 10/3/2010 10:48:00 AM
you know sarah you poems are so so so wonderful to the thoughts to the image so thank you sarah [duncan]
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Date: 10/1/2010 6:02:00 AM
Congrates on having your poem featured this week, Sarah this really is a beautiful verse .. love Jayne
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Date: 9/29/2010 8:30:00 AM
SARAH, CoNGRATULATIoNS oN HAVING YoUR PoEM FEATURED THIS WEEK*luv~SKAT
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Date: 9/29/2010 8:30:00 AM
Hello! Sarah, CONGRATULATIONS on your wonderful poem being featured this week. Enjoyed the selection of all the poetry on the front page. Have yourself a nice and wonderful day,..p.d."
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Date: 9/27/2010 6:45:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Sarah. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/26/2010 2:59:00 PM
Congrats Sarah on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a nice one to share with us all today .. with luv..my friend..
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Date: 9/21/2010 9:58:00 PM
A delight to read, Sarah!! Straight from the heart of a woman in love...Beautiful...Love, Audrey
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Date: 9/20/2010 1:46:00 PM
wishful thinking. john
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Date: 9/20/2010 7:14:00 AM
Very passionate and romantic write with flowing of the feelings, sarah
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Date: 9/19/2010 7:24:00 PM
Smile ~ I hope that life has been treating "Your Splendors" very wonderfully dear &, it is Always a nice pleasure whenever I find "Your Brightness" here at Soup along with, "Your Lovely Verse" ~ "Much Love & Warmth Always to You & All You Love," John! ~ Smile, "Have A Very Blessed & Beautiful Tomorrow 'Dear, Precious Sarah Hales,' Amid The Gentle Beating Hearts of, 'Beautiful Love;'" Bye Dear Lady!:) ~
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Date: 9/19/2010 7:13:00 PM
Smile ~ "Very Passionately Beautiful 'Dear Lovely & Gifted Sarah Hales!!!'" ~ What a wonderfully well written & expressed verse of loves moments shared with that one which "Your Treasures" love dear lady ~ Very lovely images penned amid style & class; excellent painting from the softened brush of "Your Beautiful Heart!!!" ~ ....Cont:)
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Date: 9/19/2010 6:19:00 PM
enjoyed reading your work today...have a great week!
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Date: 9/19/2010 3:10:00 PM
Very romantic and sensuous write, sarah
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Date: 9/19/2010 2:54:00 PM
NICE TO SEE YOUR POETRY TODAY SARAH*LUV~SKAT
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