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Deeper Than Knives

My mother’s words cut deeper than knives. They slash me and live deep inside my skin. Tr’velling to my heart, they eat me alive. Negative remarks radiate within. “I could just murder you right now, you witch.” I keep telling mys’lf I don’t believe her, But the more she talks, the less i can r’sist. They mult’ply and take over limb by limb, With every word my spark withers away. My spark vanished and my self esteem follows, Tears welling, spilling down my cheeks, astray. As the words eat at me, my inside hollows. The words, they’re sharp, with razor-like teeth They won’t leave my skin, they just lurk beneath.

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Date: 9/19/2024 10:25:00 AM
Hehehehe, u come across this kind of words , mostly from an African mother, I hope it's just a poem, but if it's really ur story in a poem like form, then am sorry about that, take heart , defeat the story and always bless your children with ur lips. Instead of curses, thanks for sharing
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Date: 9/19/2024 12:42:00 AM
I hope you have developed boundaries. Give yourself a hug.
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Date: 9/18/2024 7:27:00 PM
I wrote a poem to my grandmother, who just passed away this past May... I wrote it... but this one might be more fitting than mine. I have a knot in my throat! I CAN RELATE. Wish I couldn't, but I can!
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Date: 8/29/2024 6:14:00 PM
Your poems are heart wrenching, but I thank you for sharing them. You matter!
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Date: 8/21/2024 5:26:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts about a sad reality through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 8/19/2024 9:13:00 AM
You have created and written such an emotional poem! welcome to poetry soup.
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