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this poem written for online poetry class assignment: "Write a monorhyme poem based upon this image."

DEEPER DESIGN

Light moves through the trees like a quiet sign,
a hush that gathers where shadows align,
reminding the heart of a deeper design,
something tender and wordless, almost divine,
a whisper that says your path is still mine,
even when doubts in the soul intertwine,
even when courage is frail as a vine~
still, He leans close and calls me to shine.
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April 5, 2026 at 1:18 PM
Wow ~ beautiful monorhyme ~ flows seamlessly
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