Deep Within Our Hearts

Buried for eternity
in locked vaults
deep within our hearts
   lies the pain
   the anguish
   unutterable
   of hard-won
   experience...

Or so we think, until
   the faint scars
   ever so slightly
   are pricked
~ and bleed profusely
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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There Avatar
December 19, 2019 at 9:08 AM
A deep write, Gershon. Affairs of the heart tend to be a bit unpredictable... hugs.
Krutsinger Avatar
December 17, 2019 at 5:18 PM
Nothing like hard-won experience. And yet, we still "bleed profusely" sometimes.
Wolf Avatar
December 17, 2019 at 5:43 PM
Here's to less bleeding and more healing! :) gw
Gauthier Avatar
December 16, 2019 at 8:06 PM
Superbly penned, Gershon. Profound. A FAVE for me.
Wolf Avatar
December 16, 2019 at 8:17 PM
Thank you so much for your generous evaluation of this one and for the FAVE, Line! :) gw
Green Avatar
December 16, 2019 at 4:16 PM
That is so true my friend. Deeply thought provoking
Wolf Avatar
December 16, 2019 at 5:40 PM
Just make sure the deep thoughts aren't poking you! Thanks Chris.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
December 16, 2019 at 3:18 PM
Oh this is good. A fave ~xomo
Wolf Avatar
December 16, 2019 at 5:33 PM
Ooh! Thanks for the FAVE!! Peace and Joy, Gershon
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