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Deep Well

It's easy to lose hope In a world beyond repair When you can't escape the heartbreak Of the burden that you bear To see beyond your vision Into the Deep Well of your soul Where the whisper of the Spirit Calls your heart to come back home It's easy to give up In a world that doesn't care When you can't escape the longing Of a heart that's been laid bare To throw your arms wide open To embrace the Great Unknown Where the candle of forgiveness Reveals the path to lead you home It's easy to forget This life is borrowed time In the echos of forever We're just a momentary rhyme Just look beyond your vision Into the deep well of your soul And throw your arms wide open To embrace the Great Unknown Where the candle of forgiveness Reveals the path to lead you home

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Date: 4/26/2024 6:56:00 PM
So easy Thanks for flicker of hope
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Roy Wilde
Date: 4/27/2024 6:38:00 AM
Thank you so much for your kind words, hope is a wonderful gift, blessings and peace to you my friend.
Date: 4/17/2024 5:23:00 PM
Nicely done! I like your repetition with variation on 'It's easy to...'. Something about it pulls it all together giving more power to the message. Thanks for posting!
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Roy Wilde
Date: 4/27/2024 6:36:00 AM
Thank you for your input, it is greatly appreciated!
Date: 3/12/2024 3:05:00 PM
Enjoyable, deep and inspirational poem, flowing rhyme tells a story of Life. Well written.
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Date: 1/10/2024 9:57:00 AM
A good poem. Well done.
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Date: 1/7/2024 7:58:00 AM
Deep words in an emotive manner and thats a great ending... Nicely done Roy..
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Roy Wilde
Date: 1/8/2024 1:30:00 PM
Thanks agin for your input. These are actually lyrics to one of my songs.

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