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In the style of Shakespeare's 15th Sonnet 

When I consider everywhere it snows Looks swell in photos but exposes torment, That this huge coat does nothing for my toes Where on black binding boots is warmth incumbent; When I descend through storms that never cease, Feel barbwire sleet deplete my will to fly, Attempt to land on rooftops thatched with grease And hear no joyful bells while reindeer cry; Then I abandon sleigh and find a park In Southeast Houston with a sunlit bench, Where once my beard has thawed my thoughts embark To ask this naughty wish of Mr. Grinch: Because my bones are old and creak in cold, May global warming hasten, seven-fold. 11/16/2018 Picture #2

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Date: 12/19/2018 3:48:00 PM
I enjoyed the humor in this one. Thank you for participating in my contest. This is top of the list winning work. It has good flow, rhyme and rhythm. Sara
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Date: 12/16/2018 7:17:00 PM
Hmm, perhaps these are Santa's thoughts. :) But hey, he shouldn't complain much- as he only has to work one night a year. This is cute. Congratulations Phillip, on this win. ~ Brandy
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Date: 11/24/2018 9:53:00 PM
Yes, you've reinvigorated the Bard. You might call it "Shakespeare -- with reindeer! Season's best to you! :) gw
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Phillip Garcia
Date: 11/25/2018 12:31:00 AM
Ha! That's perfect! Thank you for coming by and your wonderful comments!
Date: 11/16/2018 5:27:00 PM
G'day Phillip … poor old Santa with the cold up north. Down south here Phillip he'll soon warm up. Could get to 40C so he'll get his wish - enjoyed your sonnet Phillip - Lindsay
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Date: 11/16/2018 5:45:00 AM
Poor old santa he has to go out whatever the weather, lovely to see you back on soup Phillip, hope all is well:-) hugs Jan xx
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