Notes About The Poem

In the style of Shakespeare's 15th Sonnet 

Deep Thoughts From Santa's Perspective

When I consider everywhere it snows
Looks swell in photos but exposes torment,
That this huge coat does nothing for my toes
Where on black binding boots is warmth incumbent;
When I descend through storms that never cease,
Feel barbwire sleet deplete my will to fly,
Attempt to land on rooftops thatched with grease
And hear no joyful bells while reindeer cry;
Then I abandon sleigh and find a park
In Southeast Houston with a sunlit bench,
Where once my beard has thawed my thoughts embark
To ask this naughty wish of Mr. Grinch:
	Because my bones are old and creak in cold,
	May global warming hasten, seven-fold.

11/16/2018
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Kendrick Avatar
December 19, 2018 at 3:48 PM
I enjoyed the humor in this one. Thank you for participating in my contest. This is top of the list winning work. It has good flow, rhyme and rhythm. Sara
Nicole Avatar
December 16, 2018 at 7:17 PM
Hmm, perhaps these are Santa's thoughts. :) But hey, he shouldn't complain much- as he only has to work one night a year. This is cute. Congratulations Phillip, on this win. ~ Brandy
Wolf Avatar
November 24, 2018 at 9:53 PM
Yes, you've reinvigorated the Bard. You might call it "Shakespeare -- with reindeer! Season's best to you! :) gw
Garcia Avatar
November 25, 2018 at 12:31 AM
Ha! That's perfect! Thank you for coming by and your wonderful comments!
Laurie Avatar
November 16, 2018 at 5:27 PM
G'day Phillip … poor old Santa with the cold up north. Down south here Phillip he'll soon warm up. Could get to 40C so he'll get his wish - enjoyed your sonnet Phillip - Lindsay
Allison Avatar
November 16, 2018 at 5:45 AM
Poor old santa he has to go out whatever the weather, lovely to see you back on soup Phillip, hope all is well:-) hugs Jan xx
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