Deep Thought

Deep thought reality sometimes lets you in, thoughts are deeds, see em pass, across the mind, what a blast, without a hint of sin.... let no evil thought exude, see your sister healthy dude, see aorta shrinking bulge, see it happen , me indulge, cos it can be true, xray says it do, Worked on cousin Alice…. Link her face with trouble too, See her getting better, blue, Thoughts are deeds, the magic place, Within your mind the interface, The helper can be you! Positivity IS our place…. Don Johnson Thank you Joe Maverick….

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Date: 8/5/2012 6:20:00 PM
A mighty poem Don...positive is where I need to be.... believe me...this is great to read about now.... luv...pd
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Date: 8/5/2012 5:30:00 PM
What an in depth write my friend! You sure can write these deep poems Don! I just love the xray line, that is clever! Great Work!!
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Date: 8/5/2012 6:19:00 PM
sorry to lecture you mate ...this stuff works.. i saw the xrays of the smaller bulge in her aorta
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