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Deep Thought

there within my veins
air through out my hair
silence within my mind 
and life that just isn't fair

rising i cannot see
deep thoughts that kills me deep
lust that makes no sense
and dreams that seem to only creep

rain i feel as blood
light appear to me as dark
floating below my lowest level
and grips of shame that one has lost

focus that isn't clear 
walking in which is hard to steer
sleep that hasn't come easy at all 
and today in which i no longer fall

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/8/2009 7:56:00 AM
Gladys, yes I see deep thought in your write. Very deep thought. Excellent writing. Love, Carol
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