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- Deep Passionate Kisses -

Your passionate kiss tells me how much you love me, when we meet
          Like a rose bud with thorns, I knew the same minute I met you
                We enjoyed the fragrant spicy nectar, but no fire of love








26 - 05 - 2020
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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Let the Pens Flow - Sijo Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Jenish Somadas
3rd place in the contest
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De Beaulieu Avatar
August 6, 2020 at 3:28 PM
Hello Sunshine Smile so romantic. No fire of love? Oh! Hugs Darlene xxxx-oooo.Hugs.
Andresen Avatar
August 7, 2020 at 1:00 PM
- Darlene, thank you very much for your visit and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Dietrich Avatar
June 13, 2020 at 6:48 PM
back with my congratulations, Anne-lise.
Andresen Avatar
August 2, 2020 at 7:26 AM
- Thank you very much for congratulations, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
May Avatar
June 12, 2020 at 11:51 AM
Beautiful write Anne, Congrats on your win..
Andresen Avatar
August 2, 2020 at 7:25 AM
- Thank you very much for the visit and congratulations, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Mishra Avatar
June 12, 2020 at 7:05 AM
Oh the turn at the end! You created such an engaging muse :) Congratulations on your win Anne!
Andresen Avatar
August 2, 2020 at 7:24 AM
- Thank you very much for the visit, congratulations and your supportive comment, Aditi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Somadas Avatar
June 12, 2020 at 1:13 AM
A romantic meet ended in vanity..Love with out fire..Sad but great write..Congratulations Anne..
Andresen Avatar
August 2, 2020 at 7:24 AM
- Jenish, thank you very much for your visit and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Mcconnell Avatar
June 3, 2020 at 2:08 PM
Fine penning Anne-Lise, full of passion and insightful thoughts. Hope all is well, Blessings,Gordon
Andresen Avatar
August 2, 2020 at 7:23 AM
- Thank you very much Gordon, for your visit and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Dietrich Avatar
May 30, 2020 at 2:31 PM
yes, that was a twist at the end there. All that and no love!
Andresen Avatar
August 2, 2020 at 7:23 AM
- Thank you very much for your visit and comments, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Roper Avatar
May 29, 2020 at 1:39 PM
Nicely done, Sunshine, just once it takes to know the fire of a passionate kisses from the one you truly love. Good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve
Andresen Avatar
August 2, 2020 at 7:22 AM
- Eve, thank you very much for your visit and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Trifiatis Avatar
May 29, 2020 at 9:04 AM
Powerful writing dearest, Anne-Lise! Hugs and blessings!
Andresen Avatar
August 2, 2020 at 7:22 AM
- Thank you very much my friend Demetrios, for your visit and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
May 28, 2020 at 5:47 PM
A wonderfully expressive write, Anne lise...too bad the kiss ended without the fireworks, but there are many kinds of love...best of luck in the contest. xx Rhonda :)
Andresen Avatar
August 2, 2020 at 7:21 AM
- Thank you very much for your visit and comments, Rhonda :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Brul Avatar
May 28, 2020 at 3:35 AM
Ohh so lovely!! Goodluck for the win!!
Andresen Avatar
August 2, 2020 at 7:21 AM
- Thank you very much JCB, for your visit and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Romios Avatar
May 27, 2020 at 3:06 PM
Best wishes, Anne Lise! Panagioa
Andresen Avatar
August 2, 2020 at 7:20 AM
- Thank you very much for your visit and comments, Panagiota :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Warrior Avatar
May 27, 2020 at 2:47 PM
Nice shorty Anne-Lise...great entry my friend...best wishes from the Wingster and (((Hugs))) :o)
Andresen Avatar
August 2, 2020 at 7:20 AM
- W.W., thank you very much for your visit and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Mcintosh Avatar
May 27, 2020 at 9:14 AM
This is a wonderful write. God bless you always with love, Gina
Andresen Avatar
August 2, 2020 at 7:20 AM
- Thank you very much Gina, for your visit and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Gentile Avatar
May 27, 2020 at 8:08 AM
I love how your first line makes me think "how much" only in terms of the highest degree, when in the end, that kiss told you how much all right and it was not what I thought. So clever Anne-Lise! Good luck in the contest !
Andresen Avatar
August 2, 2020 at 7:19 AM
- Thank you very much Mike, for your visit and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Proxenos Avatar
May 27, 2020 at 1:49 AM
That is sad - two people looking for love, all the right surroundings and yet one of them is not on fire! The time will come when all the stars will explode! Love and hugs dear Sunshine Smile, Jennifer.
Andresen Avatar
August 2, 2020 at 7:19 AM
- Dear Jenny, thank you very much for your visit and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Tor Avatar
May 26, 2020 at 7:27 PM
Tom said it best below. Exactly my words. Enjoyed reading.
Andresen Avatar
August 2, 2020 at 7:18 AM
- Michael, thank you very much for your visit and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
One Avatar
May 26, 2020 at 4:55 PM
So it was not a true kiss? Just a moment of passion? :)
Andresen Avatar
August 2, 2020 at 7:18 AM
- Thank you very much for your visit and comments, S.O. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Cunningham Avatar
May 26, 2020 at 4:45 PM
Without love passion is short lived, its love that keeps the fires burning. Tom
Andresen Avatar
August 2, 2020 at 7:17 AM
- Thank you very much Tom, for your visit and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Allison Avatar
May 26, 2020 at 2:10 PM
is it love or merely lust - fabulous imagery Anne-Lise:-) hugs jan x
Andresen Avatar
May 26, 2020 at 2:32 PM
- a game of lust ... many thanks for visits and comments, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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