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Deep Ocean Tune

Water droplets become liquid pearls, delicately balanced on milky white petals Crowning gems sparkling jewels mist under lashes gleam The beautiful white yellow sunlight all visible wavelengths of light refraction Fluttering a rainbow promise under the bridge colors bright The goddess of fertility, wealth and comfort her name Dana-Ana A crowning beauty sings whom stands in every dream Sitting on deep rocks a treasure who combs every feeling Sea cradled her and she heard Neptune whisper .... so beautiful you are With golden glowing fingers of emotions held captivated in her rays Filled with warm love when evening shadows and stars turns out in the sky Written by L. Mcdaid & A-L Andresen Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Wendy Rycroft

Date: 10/20/2015 6:42:00 AM

Also very good x I am quiet jealous wish I had that same talent x Wendy

Poesy Relish

Date: 5/11/2015 12:05:00 AM

A brillian collaboration.. great work you two... nad

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/10/2015 1:25:00 AM

You two write beautifully together. Kindred spirits whose poetry flows together like the ocean meeting the river, blending yet creatively unique. Bravo to you both!

Eve Roper

Date: 5/9/2015 11:42:00 AM

Wonderful write from both of you, love all the beautiful, colorful words as a paint brush flows smooth with liquin and oils on a canvas :~) hugs

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/7/2015 4:43:00 PM

enthralled by the magic of your collab, liam.. huggs

Monterey Sirak

Date: 5/6/2015 7:27:00 AM

An absolutely lyrical and magical collaboration. Well done,you two!

Arthur Vaso

Date: 5/3/2015 11:46:00 PM

I came by to read this again, if this makes any sense to you both ,this is almost deja vu to my own thoughts!

Arthur Vaso

Date: 5/3/2015 12:12:00 AM

This is so beautiful, what a wonderful collaboration!!!!

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 5/2/2015 4:28:00 PM

Hi Liam n' Anne-Lise!Another very beautiful and enchanting loving love poem penned by you my dearest friends.Just dazzling!Very captivating.A very romantic beautiful sweet and amazing love poem to be held so very close to ones heart.smiling!A real gem.Enjoyed it!Great imagery!Just awesome.Fantastic collaboration!Love it.A 7+++ to each!Your pens are truly mighty golden!To me you're the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful romantic,gentle and sweet.Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In his light!God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/2/2015 2:35:00 PM

- There are many who must search for life - but it can take a minute to find a special person - One hour to appreciate them - a day to love them. - And a lifetime to forget them - To find the pleasure with you in the power of words, I really appreciate it dear friend Liam - Thanks for another beautiful poem !!! - hugs & <3 // Anne-Lise :)

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 5/11/2015 6:44:00 AM

your so sweet anne lise always a great pleasure and honor writing with you pal thank you for the heartfelt wonderful comment bless you always dear friend

Jan Allison

Date: 5/2/2015 2:15:00 PM

I marvel at the way your pens run so flawlessly - divine imagery - another 7 from me Anne Lise and Liam:-) Hugs Jan xx

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 5/11/2015 5:50:00 AM

ah thank you jan dear pal anne lise her quill sings with the angels wishing you a lovely week dear friend