Liam Mcdaid Poet Couplet

Deep Ocean Tune

Water droplets become liquid pearls, delicately balanced on milky white petals
Crowning gems sparkling jewels mist under lashes gleam

The beautiful white yellow sunlight all visible wavelengths of light refraction
Fluttering a rainbow promise under the bridge colors bright 

The goddess of fertility, wealth and comfort her name Dana-Ana
A crowning beauty sings whom stands in every dream

Sitting on deep rocks a treasure who combs every feeling
Sea cradled her and she heard Neptune whisper .... so beautiful you are

With golden glowing  fingers of emotions held captivated in her rays 
Filled with warm love when evening shadows and stars turns out in the sky



Written by L. Mcdaid & A-L Andresen 
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Wendy Rycroft October 20, 2015 at 6:42 AM Also very good x I am quiet jealous wish I had that same talent x Wendy

Poesy Relish May 11, 2015 at 12:05 AM A brillian collaboration.. great work you two... nad

Connie Marcum Wong May 10, 2015 at 1:25 AM You two write beautifully together. Kindred spirits whose poetry flows together like the ocean meeting the river, blending yet creatively unique. Bravo to you both!

Eve Roper May 9, 2015 at 11:42 AM Wonderful write from both of you, love all the beautiful, colorful words as a paint brush flows smooth with liquin and oils on a canvas :~) hugs

Nette Onclaud May 7, 2015 at 4:43 PM enthralled by the magic of your collab, liam.. huggs

Monterey Sirak May 6, 2015 at 7:27 AM An absolutely lyrical and magical collaboration. Well done,you two!

Arthur Vaso May 3, 2015 at 11:46 PM I came by to read this again, if this makes any sense to you both ,this is almost deja vu to my own thoughts!

Arthur Vaso May 3, 2015 at 12:12 AM This is so beautiful, what a wonderful collaboration!!!!

Dorian Petersen Potter May 2, 2015 at 4:28 PM Hi Liam n' Anne-Lise!Another very beautiful and enchanting loving love poem penned by you my dearest friends.Just dazzling!Very captivating.A very romantic beautiful sweet and amazing love poem to be held so very close to ones heart.smiling!A real gem.Enjoyed it!Great imagery!Just awesome.Fantastic collaboration!Love it.A 7+++ to each!Your pens are truly mighty golden!To me you're the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful romantic,gentle and sweet.Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In his light!God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^

Anne-Lise Andresen May 2, 2015 at 2:35 PM - There are many who must search for life - but it can take a minute to find a special person - One hour to appreciate them - a day to love them. - And a lifetime to forget them - To find the pleasure with you in the power of words, I really appreciate it dear friend Liam - Thanks for another beautiful poem !!! - hugs & <3 // Anne-Lise :) Liam Mcdaid May 11, 2015 at 6:44 AM your so sweet anne lise always a great pleasure and honor writing with you pal thank you for the heartfelt wonderful comment bless you always dear friend

Jan Allison May 2, 2015 at 2:15 PM I marvel at the way your pens run so flawlessly - divine imagery - another 7 from me Anne Lise and Liam:-) Hugs Jan xx Liam Mcdaid May 11, 2015 at 5:50 AM ah thank you jan dear pal anne lise her quill sings with the angels wishing you a lovely week dear friend