Deep Ocean

falling dew
one token
drops of happiness
a foundation
for dreams
Your light i am  
A pale white glow 
shimmering softly 
in slow descent
 
Melting cold winds 
calming your tide 
reaching the silence 
above the sand 
You shall not die 
when the flame fades 
when i immerse 
in vetdant shades
 
You shall live on 
eternal youth 
with all its strength 
and hidden truth 
And through the night 
wet salt and mist 
reveal the thirstiness 

of hundred tales 
till the moon shines 
in its crescendo 
dripping its honey 
in still embrace 
Sky sprinkles stardust 
upon your lips 
till new dawn greets you 
with a new kiss 

leaving footprints
in warm sunshine
sailing within
an ocean paradise
chambers reserved
for one so beautiful
only in dreams
holding hands
once kissed
becomes real
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Deschler Avatar
September 30, 2013 at 5:22 PM
Very beautiful imagery in this inspiring poem. I really loved the final verse. It makes us feel like our dreams are not so far away from us, like we can reach out and touch them. Fantastic work, Liam!...Thank you for the nice comments!
Carroll Avatar
September 30, 2013 at 6:46 AM
Hi Liam, wonderful romantic write my friend..Well done.. Ken
Mohammed Avatar
September 30, 2013 at 5:47 AM
Loved this one Liam....Another gem from the pen....sighs
Kendrick Avatar
September 30, 2013 at 4:52 AM
I like the flow and the tender romantic tone to this work..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
Chircop Avatar
September 30, 2013 at 3:52 AM
going to my fvs
Chircop Avatar
September 30, 2013 at 3:50 AM
falling dew-one token-drops of happiness-a fondation for dreams/These are my favourite verses of all the poem Such a beauty as if inspired by venus blanket of warm light and romance
Mcdaid Avatar
September 30, 2013 at 12:04 PM
inspiring beyond teardrops making poetry sounds in comment a musical beauty thank you dearly heartfelt appreciated
Chircop Avatar
September 30, 2013 at 11:13 AM
I just love the ending verses..pure magic
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