Get Your Premium Membership

Deep Mindfulness

Awake, oh hermit! Employ innate flair
Sieving vibrations as they do arise
Intercepting each desire in midair!

Feeling the stirrings, within our heart rise
Before they crystallise into a thought
View these cravings with nonchalant surprise 

Vigilant mindfulness the way, self taught
Discerning if the urge is love aligned
Rejecting those with desire or fear fraught

Connected to the source, all is divined
Accepting love exalted, as assigned

23-November-2020

(syllabic Terza Rima)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 11/24/2020 11:37:00 AM
Hello Unseeking Seeking, I can tell you did not like my comment. So I will begin again. Medication has deep meaning to me. When i do medication i feel peaceful. I hope this is a better comment fothis poem. if not i am sorry i tried. Enjoy your day my friend.
Login to Reply
De Beaulieu Avatar
Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/25/2020 10:57:00 AM
Hello Unseeking Seeker, i am at peace now that i have heard from you. Thank you. enjoy your day my friend.
Seeker Avatar
Unseeking Seeker
Date: 11/24/2020 6:15:00 PM
Please! I’m ok with your observations! Be it medication or meditation, we each have to choose our way. Be at peace! :)

Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry