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Deep Love

Humans sink deep in love When they fall into; Just as an unconscious body sink gently deep in the sea; It travels far down sans any fear of aquatic animals; So as the loving pair walks holding each other's hand. Fronting all troubles while enjoying the love. Their emotions are as strong as a lion's roar. Some reaches to the end together; But some couples departs in the middle. The pain of departure is just like as a soul leaves a body. Crush is always so energetic, Courageous, close and full of belief; It's beyond of all kind of emotions. Some even waits for their love to return, That proves how strong the emotions of crush are. It's a part of everyone's vitality. It's a domain where we feel more alive. It's a sea of pureness; In which all wish to sink very deep. _________________________________________ Written Date - 27th September 2014 Submission date on Poetry Soup - 22nd September 2016 For Laura Loo. Hope this write will make you fall in love all over again. All the best for your Wedding Anniversary.

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Date: 6/26/2017 4:56:00 PM
Yes the crush is energetic, I find it high on emotion.Yes some do wait for the love to return,yes it shows how strong the emotion really is. This is so true to facts. my friend.
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Augustus Black
Date: 6/29/2017 10:45:00 PM
Darlene, thank you very much. - A.B
Date: 10/4/2016 5:43:00 AM
I like this. A sea of pureness, what a metaphor. Many wishes, Kai
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Date: 9/26/2016 3:32:00 PM
this was beautiful for her. Congratulations.
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Augustus Black
Date: 9/26/2016 8:44:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 9/23/2016 10:53:00 AM
Augustus- thank you for the anniversary wishes, that was very sweet of you :) lovely poem :) congratulations on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest :)-luloo
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Augustus Black
Date: 9/24/2016 2:47:00 AM
You are always welcome. I am also very much thankful to you, for giving placement for my poem. This is the first time ever I have got any placement in contest. So, thanks a lot again.
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Augustus Black
Date: 9/24/2016 2:47:00 AM
*duplicate comment*

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