Deep Infatuaton

Rainfall excites as the new moonlight slips,
and drop by drop I know my heart is taken
by him , pressing between the mouths and lips
as trickles of first love grow unshaken.

Oh he leaps, enthralled by our pure romance
that I can feel his wonder…to laugh, to tease
igniting bright ardor without resistance,
while drizzles hum tunes of summertime’s breeze.

Gently, rainfall drenches one silhouette
meshed in affection through an evening, kind
till we replay theme songs like a duet,
engrossed in youth's charm, tossing all behind.



Contest : Limerence  for Nayda Ivette Negron
7-17-2016

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 7/23/2016 3:11:00 AM
I love this poem..great win!
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Date: 7/21/2016 7:04:00 PM
Nette, such a perfectly written sentiment lady...so romantic and with such wonderful flowing emotion..congrats on your placement in the contest lovely Nette...:)-luloo
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Date: 7/21/2016 6:37:00 PM
Congratulations Nette on the placement of the contest
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Date: 7/19/2016 12:52:00 AM
Wow, infatuated by your stirring poem. They say first love never dies, it just lingers in the mind, every now and then. Worthy of a 7.
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Date: 7/18/2016 5:45:00 PM
I have to say this is a spectacular poem! I remember those younger days when every heartbeat went love-crazy. High seven and betting on this one!
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Date: 7/18/2016 5:30:00 PM
I sowed oats long time ago and had precious moments of youth.With a poem as excellent as this , you made me walk down memory lane, lady!
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Date: 7/18/2016 4:57:00 PM
Some excellent imagery here nette. I like the rain being paired with love. Very sweet.
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Date: 7/18/2016 3:25:00 PM
I can feel your great love of rain in this beutiful poem Nette. Rain too has captured my heart and I have written several poems exalting its wonder. I love this and hope it scores high. 7 : )
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Date: 7/18/2016 2:09:00 PM
Great one nette. Good luck. Love,
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