Deep Infatuaton

Rainfall excites as the new moonlight slips,
and drop by drop I know my heart is taken
by him , pressing between the mouths and lips
as trickles of first love grow unshaken.

Oh he leaps, enthralled by our pure romance
that I can feel his wonder…to laugh, to tease
igniting bright ardor without resistance,
while drizzles hum tunes of summertime’s breeze.

Gently, rainfall drenches one silhouette
meshed in affection through an evening, kind
till we replay theme songs like a duet,
engrossed in youth's charm, tossing all behind.



Contest : Limerence  for Nayda Ivette Negron
7-17-2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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James Avatar
July 23, 2016 at 3:11 AM
I love this poem..great win!
Scars Avatar
July 21, 2016 at 7:04 PM
Nette, such a perfectly written sentiment lady...so romantic and with such wonderful flowing emotion..congrats on your placement in the contest lovely Nette...:)-luloo
Negron Flores Avatar
July 21, 2016 at 6:37 PM
Congratulations Nette on the placement of the contest
Datu Avatar
July 19, 2016 at 12:52 AM
Wow, infatuated by your stirring poem. They say first love never dies, it just lingers in the mind, every now and then. Worthy of a 7.
Lalion Avatar
July 18, 2016 at 5:45 PM
I have to say this is a spectacular poem! I remember those younger days when every heartbeat went love-crazy. High seven and betting on this one!
Sabre Avatar
July 18, 2016 at 5:30 PM
I sowed oats long time ago and had precious moments of youth.With a poem as excellent as this , you made me walk down memory lane, lady!
Smith Avatar
July 18, 2016 at 4:57 PM
Some excellent imagery here nette. I like the rain being paired with love. Very sweet.
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 18, 2016 at 3:25 PM
I can feel your great love of rain in this beutiful poem Nette. Rain too has captured my heart and I have written several poems exalting its wonder. I love this and hope it scores high. 7 : )
Chakrabarty Avatar
July 18, 2016 at 2:09 PM
Great one nette. Good luck. Love,
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