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Deep In Thought

Down the old road a lantern turns ash-gray bulb angled like pendulum clinging on darkened sill. With rainfall drowning the fragrance of trees, my eyes grow weeds as light dims on rake of brittle thoughts. Through My Window Contest 18 Jan 14 from Franco Gonza

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Date: 1/23/2014 10:03:00 PM
absolutely beautiful ! Congrats on your win!
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Date: 1/23/2014 8:43:00 AM
Way to go..Great winner..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 1/23/2014 8:05:00 AM
Beautiful interpretation ands congratulations on the win, Franco
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