Deep In My Mind

The snow is trickling, glistening in my eyes
Mesmerized I look deep into the beauteous skies
Infatuated! Gazing! The imagery enchants me
Seeking withing me as I tremble in the bitter cold
I look! I breathe in the brisk chilled air
I saw reflections in my mind - flakes one of a kind
Sparkling as it flows down onto our roots
I see my rose covered in its' prominent bed
The love I instilled in my delicate mind
The remembrance of the thorn then in my head
I stand tall - I am looking to find
This delicate bud! Embracing me
Beneath the snow - she died at freeze
And sits and ponders in the ferocious breeze 
Still as I sit and wonder of her beauty so wild
The love she displays , she is rooted in place
Beauteous! I know her delicate prominence
Hence! She stunts her glamorous growth 
And the petals - velvety - so elegant and pure
Keep fond in memory without a trace
Visions still in my mind - she blooms
She stands tall in life - proud to be
The most beautiful flower - iridescently
Glistening still in the snow is the bush
Thorns in my sight - they boast proud
To grow the rose - strong by my side
Feelings - I embrace - feelings I hide
The love I symbolize - I still see in my eyes
This beautiful bud! Still bedded by the skies

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 11/27/2013 12:24:00 PM
very beautiful poem
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Stacey Law
Date: 11/27/2013 12:59:00 PM
Thank you! Have a beautiful holiday
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