Constance La France Poet Rhyme

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"Grief must not be stifled; it must have tears, an outlet, a sigh, words."

   Quote by _ Constance

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Deep Grief

 
Deep grief as my soul is bleeding
and I walk paths quiet
around me the trees are creaking
the birds hold their riot

I am serenity
I am tranquility 
and deep placidity

death bleak
deep grief



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October 19, 2021


Poetry/Rhyme/Quietus/Deep Grief
Copyright Protected, ID 10-1398-298-19
All Rights Reserved, 2021, Constance La France


Written for the Premier contest, Quietus, October 2021
sponsor, Unseeking Seeker,  Judged 10/27/2021

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Janice Canerdy October 28, 2021 at 6:33 AM Lovely, moving piece, Constance. Favorite line--4. CONGRATS on your win! Janice Constance La France October 28, 2021 at 11:23 AM Janice, thanks for the compliment, "the birds hold their riot" I like that one too, and thank you for the congrats ~ friendship and poetry _Constance

Kim Rodrigues October 28, 2021 at 4:36 AM I’m okay until I read your lines, which depict what is inside of me. Congratulations, Constance! Nicely done. Constance La France October 28, 2021 at 6:02 AM Kim, thank you for the comment, compliment and congratulations, yes, I sense we share griefs lament ~ friendship and poetry _Constance

Christuraj Alex October 28, 2021 at 12:04 AM Wow! So serene! Congratulations! Constance La France October 28, 2021 at 6:02 AM Christuraj, thank you for the compliment and congratulations ~ friendship and poetry _Constance

Unseeking Seeker October 27, 2021 at 9:13 PM We can transmute grief into heavenly bliss, serenity and tranquility, Constance! Simply by recognising our emotion as an offered life experience for soul growth, thus viewing the play from the vibrant void. Thank you for participating and congrats on your win! A brilliant write, as always! Constance La France October 28, 2021 at 6:04 AM Seeker, thank you for the inspiration and the contest and my placement. And for the comment, compliment and congrats, I think some are afraid to write about their grief but as you know I can and do ~ friendship and poetry _Constance

Regina Mcintosh October 19, 2021 at 3:37 PM Yes. so true - quite eloquent - quite beautiful. Love it. God bless you sweet lady. Love, Gina Constance La France October 20, 2021 at 7:05 AM Gina, thank you for the compliment on my poem, God bless ~ love and serenity _Constance