Evelyn Judy Buehler Poet Dodoitsu

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Deep Green

in the coolness of shadows
in the misty fountain spray
thrilling to summer's last steps
in midst of birdsong

in a park of pleasantness
so peaceful near the flowers
radiance rules the daytime 
echoing through night

green is the color of life
and August is so alive
butterflies brighten the shade
this peaceful Sunday

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Alexis Y. October 29, 2020 at 12:24 PM WoW! Evelyn, You painted such a lovely peaceful picture with your words. I enjoyed what I saw:-) Alexis Evelyn Judy Buehler October 29, 2020 at 3:36 PM I'm so glad to know that, Alexis. Thank you very much. :=)

Sam Kauffman October 29, 2020 at 11:51 AM I can hear the sound of the waterfalls and see the serenity in your picture of words, Evelyn. Reminds me of the painting of Sunday in the Park. It too is filled with "the color of life" - green. Harvest blessings my friend. Evelyn Judy Buehler October 29, 2020 at 3:34 PM I am happy that this poem calls to mind such an art masterpiece, Sam. Thank you for the wonderful compliment, and for your many other kind words. Blessings of the season to you, my friend.

Victor Buhagiar October 29, 2020 at 12:14 AM Your imagery is perfect. Well done. ~~ Evelyn Judy Buehler October 29, 2020 at 10:12 AM Thank you for the smiles, Victor. :)

Kim Rodrigues October 28, 2020 at 8:58 PM A pleasant and peaceful poem! Nice read this evening. Evelyn Judy Buehler October 28, 2020 at 9:37 PM Thank you for the fine compliment, Kim. :)

Susan Ashley October 28, 2020 at 7:24 PM I adore the beautiful imagery of your poem, Evelyn. The spirit of this piece is both serene and thrilling. I especially love; "butterflies brighten the shade this peaceful Sunday" - my imagination delights at my heart's pleasure with this last affecting line. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan Evelyn Judy Buehler October 28, 2020 at 8:04 PM Your words fill me with joy, Susan. Thank you for your warm words and for letting me know how much you enjoyed this. Deepest regards, Evelyn