Deep Green

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in the coolness of shadows in the misty fountain spray thrilling to summer's last steps in midst of birdsong in a park of pleasantness so peaceful near the flowers radiance rules the daytime echoing through night green is the color of life and August is so alive butterflies brighten the shade this peaceful Sunday

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Alexis Y.

Date: 10/29/2020 12:24:00 PM

WoW! Evelyn, You painted such a lovely peaceful picture with your words. I enjoyed what I saw:-) Alexis

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 10/29/2020 3:36:00 PM

I'm so glad to know that, Alexis. Thank you very much. :=)

Sam Kauffman

Date: 10/29/2020 11:51:00 AM

I can hear the sound of the waterfalls and see the serenity in your picture of words, Evelyn. Reminds me of the painting of Sunday in the Park. It too is filled with "the color of life" - green. Harvest blessings my friend.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 10/29/2020 3:34:00 PM

I am happy that this poem calls to mind such an art masterpiece, Sam. Thank you for the wonderful compliment, and for your many other kind words. Blessings of the season to you, my friend.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/29/2020 12:14:00 AM

Your imagery is perfect. Well done. ~~

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 10/29/2020 10:12:00 AM

Thank you for the smiles, Victor. :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/28/2020 8:58:00 PM

A pleasant and peaceful poem! Nice read this evening.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 10/28/2020 9:37:00 PM

Thank you for the fine compliment, Kim. :)

Susan Ashley

Date: 10/28/2020 7:24:00 PM

I adore the beautiful imagery of your poem, Evelyn. The spirit of this piece is both serene and thrilling. I especially love; "butterflies brighten the shade this peaceful Sunday" - my imagination delights at my heart's pleasure with this last affecting line. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 10/28/2020 8:04:00 PM

Your words fill me with joy, Susan. Thank you for your warm words and for letting me know how much you enjoyed this. Deepest regards, Evelyn