Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Footle

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- Deep Fall -

bad joke
                                          old soak

                                          been told
                                          quite bold

                                          short bliss
                                          like this

                                          your show
                                          is low

                                          a tool
                                          for fools

                                          not fun
                                          must run






01.11.2022
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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Vijay Pandit November 2, 2022 at 5:51 AM I like you quote --and your lovely Footle poem, Anne-Lise.

Tom Cunningham November 2, 2022 at 3:45 AM Great string of footles Anne, they're so addictive once you start. Tom Anne-Lise Andresen November 2, 2022 at 3:50 AM - They don't come easily to me, Tom ... rhyming in English is hard for me :) - hugs

Victor Buhagiar November 2, 2022 at 2:43 AM Fascinating. Well done, Sunshine. Hugs. Anne-Lise Andresen November 2, 2022 at 3:54 AM - Thanks - Footle isn't my favorite form, Victor ... for those who are good at rhyming ... I like to read ... - hugs

Heidi Sands November 1, 2022 at 2:47 PM Excellent. Well done Sunshine. Hugs :) Anne-Lise Andresen November 2, 2022 at 3:50 AM - Thanks for your comments, Heidi :) - hugs