Deep Enough To Bruise the Soul

He didnt know the wounds would go
Deep enough to bruise her soul
She lay there froze when he arose
She replaced her battered clothes
Rather the blows from clydesdales toes
Or the fate of conquered foes
This painful load forever to hold
A friend not stranger from her stole
He didnt think her dad would drink
Then find his gun beneath the sink
He hasnt blinked he's at the brink
Wants to feed animal instincts
Moms half insane feels daughters pain
Her tears form puddles like the rain
Her child explains how she's ashamed
Now mommy wants to share the blame
He didnt weep in courtroom seat
Jury discussion deliberately brief
Not very steep the sentence was weak
They only handed him three hundred weeks
He never did speak almost like asleep
He'll spend many cold nights wrapped in a thin sheet
Tried to be discreet almost lost heartbeat
When those bars of steel slid right past his feet.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 7/5/2012 8:13:00 PM
Shantez, deep enough,,,.. excellent poem, thank you and have yourself a good night~PD
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Date: 7/5/2012 4:46:00 PM
Yes this is definitely deep <3
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Date: 7/5/2012 10:07:00 AM
Word of sorry I have read. May all find peace and be blessed.
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Date: 7/5/2012 10:02:00 AM
strongly written piece, I enjoyed reading your work this morning
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