Deep Down

Theres a thin edge; to every wedge.'

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/30/2023 1:48:00 PM

Few words with much said. Have a blessed day writing away......................

Joe Maverick
Date: 1/31/2023 10:32:00 AM

Much is seen..Much is heard Plenty to consider... Return the WORD..!

Kelly Deschler

Date: 1/26/2023 11:08:00 AM

Moving mountains... it doesn't take much does it?... Well, one has to start somewhere, little by little... You give the reader much to think about with just a few words, Joe. Good work!

Joe Maverick
Date: 1/27/2023 9:20:00 AM

Hi Kelly..Thanks for the time Taken here.'

Speaks Volumes

Date: 1/15/2023 10:21:00 AM

So true Joe

Joe Maverick
Date: 1/15/2023 3:26:00 PM

Wendy 'true blue' love to you' And your husband and all thats yours..' I must add do not Conform to the pattern of this World which is passing away 'Dying' yet Be renewed by the transforming Of your mind.' Have a rewarding Day.'

Elizabeth Mccann

Date: 1/14/2023 10:47:00 PM

But that is not all; there's also a wall! Elizabeth

Joe Maverick
Date: 1/15/2023 12:09:00 AM

Ahh the wall to stall.' Let The earthquake and tear Down such one and all.'